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The Price of Five Hundred

by carlosspankcub

Hector had counted the register twice, and both times it came up five hundred dollars short. Not because of a miscount — because of what he'd done three nights ago, sliding the bills into his sock dur

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Hector had counted the register twice, and both times it came up five hundred dollars short. Not because of a miscount — because of what he'd done three nights ago, sliding the bills into his sock during closing, heart hammering so loud he could hear it in his teeth. Five hundred dollars. The exact amount needed to keep his credit card from tanking into penalty territory. The exact amount that would buy him groceries and bus fare until next Friday's paycheck. It wasn't clever. It wasn't even particularly careful. It was desperation wearing a borrowed uniform.

The apartment he shared with his parents and two younger sisters had thin walls and thinner patience. His mother's voice carried through the drywall like she was standing in the room with you, and the nightly chorus of "Hector, the toilet's doing that thing again" and "Hector, did you eat the last of the milk" made him feel like the building's superintendent, financial advisor, and emotional shock absorber all rolled into one twenty-year-old in slacks that were starting to shine at the knees.

Arby's wasn't glamorous. The polyester shirt scratched his collarbones and the smell of roast beef had permanently colonized his nostrils, but it was money, and money was the only language his life understood right now. He'd been there four months. Long enough to know that Vinnie, the general manager, ran the place like a personal fiefdom — scheduling people he liked for the good shifts, docking hours from anyone who looked at him sideways, and keeping a rotating cast of assistant managers who either worshipped him or kept their mouths shut.

Dumont was the current deputy. Omar Dumont — everyone called him by his last name — was a thick-necked guy in his mid-thirties who wore his Arby's polo like it was a badge of authority in a small country. He and Vinnie had a rhythm together, the kind of shorthand that comes from years of shared contempt. They'd been finding ways to make Hector's shifts harder since week one. Scheduling him for the Friday dinner rush alone. "Forgetting" to approve his time corrections. Making jokes about his height — Hector was five-foot-four on a good day — that landed just shy of friendly.

So when Vinnie appeared at the service counter at 2:47 on a Tuesday afternoon and said, "Hector, back office. Now," in a voice like a door closing, Hector felt something cold settle into the base of his stomach.

Dumont was already inside when Hector pushed through the swinging door. The back office was small — a desk crammed with paperwork, a filing cabinet with a broken lock, a metal table that held the safe and a coffee maker that looked like it had survived a war. The air smelled like burnt Folgers and industrial cleaning spray. Vinnie closed the door behind Hector. The click of the lock was quiet and deliberate.

"Sit down," Vinnie said. He didn't point to a chair. He didn't need to.

Hector sat. His palms were damp. He pressed them against his slacks.

Vinnie leaned against the desk, arms crossed over his chest. He was a tall man, mid-forties, with a gut that strained his belt and a way of looking at people that made them feel like they were being inventoried. Dumont stood by the filing cabinet, arms at his sides, watching with the patient stillness of a man who already knew how this ended.

"We did an audit," Vinnie said. "Last week's close. You were on register three of those nights."

Hector said nothing. His throat had gone dry.

"Five hundred dollars, Hector." Vinnie let the number hang. "That's not a rounding error. That's not a mistake. That's theft."

"I —"

"Don't." Vinnie held up a hand. "Don't insult me. I've been doing this long enough to know the difference between a screwup and a steal. You took that money."

The silence that followed was physical. Hector could feel it pressing against his ears. He thought about his mother's face if he got arrested. He thought about his sisters. He thought about the credit card statement folded inside his sock drawer at home, the red numbers at the bottom.

"I needed it," Hector said quietly. It came out small and true and completely inadequate.

Vinnie nodded slowly, as if this confirmed something he'd already decided. "Yeah. People always need it. Everett needed it too, couple years back. Stole from the register, same as you. Borrowed money without asking. Thought he was clever." Vinnie's mouth twitched. "He wasn't clever either."

Hector didn't know who Everett was. He didn't like the way Vinnie said his name — like it was a punchline to a joke Hector hadn't heard.

"Here's the thing," Vinnie continued. "What you've done is serious. Five hundred bucks is petit larceny, but it's still larceny. I call the cops, you get a record. You lose this job. You get a mark that follows you every time you apply for anything for the rest of your life."

Hector's hands were shaking. He clasped them together between his knees.

"Or," Vinnie said, and the word sat in the room like a live wire, "we handle this in-house. Local discipline. You take what's coming to you, we square the books, and nobody outside this room ever has to know."

Hector looked between them. Vinnie's face was unreadable. Dumont's was something worse — interested.

"What does that mean," Hector said. Not a question. A bracing.

"It means what I said. Local discipline. You take it, we're done. You don't, I pick up the phone."

"What kind of discipline?"

Vinnie smiled. It was the first time Hector had seen him smile all shift, and it didn't help. "That's not how this works. You don't get a menu. You get the choice: this, or the cops."

The cold thing in Hector's stomach spread upward into his chest. He thought about the apartment. The thin walls. His mother's voice. The way she'd sound different — smaller, frightened — if a police officer showed up at the door.

"Okay," he said. "Okay. Fine. Whatever it is. Just — okay."

Vinnie pushed off the desk and walked to the metal table. He swept the coffee maker aside with one arm. It sloshed but didn't spill. "Strip down to your briefs and bend over the table."

"What?" Hector's voice cracked on the word.

"You heard me."

"I — no. No, that's —"

"That's the deal," Vinnie said. "Take it or leave it. And leaving it means I'm dialing 9-1-1 in about thirty seconds."

Hector didn't move. His body had locked up, every muscle tensed against the instruction like his bones had turned to concrete. He looked at Dumont, hoping for some kind of intervention — a voice of reason, a moderation, anything — but Dumont just watched him with that same patient expression, like a man waiting for a bus.

"Last chance, Hector."

Hector stood up. His legs felt like they belonged to someone else. He reached for his tie — the clip-on tie Arby's required, cheap black polyester — and unclipped it. Then his fingers went to the buttons of his shirt. They were trembling so badly that the second button took three tries. He got the shirt off and folded it, because of course he folded it, because some part of his brain was still operating on autopilot, still trying to be neat, still trying to be good.

He unbuckled his belt. The leather hissed through the loops. He stepped out of his slacks and stood there in white briefs and black socks, feeling more exposed than he'd ever been in his life. The office was cold. The fluorescent light buzzed above him, washing out every shadow, leaving nothing hidden.

"Over the table," Vinnie said.

Hector didn't move. He couldn't.

Dumont stepped forward. His hand was gentle on Hector's shoulder — that was the worst part, the gentleness — and he guided Hector the three steps to the table. "Come on, kid," Dumont murmured. "Just bend over. Arms flat. It'll go faster if you don't fight it."

Hector bent over the table. The metal was cold against his chest and stomach. He felt Dumont's hand press flat against his lower back, holding him in place with a firm, steady pressure. Not rough. Not cruel. Just certain.

Then he heard the sound of Vinnie pulling his belt off.

The leather sliding through loops. The soft clink of the buckle. Then nothing for a moment — a silence so sharp it had edges.

"One hundred," Vinnie said.

The first crack landed before Hector understood what was happening. A line of fire across both cheeks, sharp and blinding, and Hector's body jerked forward against the table with a sound that came out of him without permission — a yelp, high and startled, nothing like the voice of a twenty-year-old man.

Vinnie didn't pause. The second stroke came hard on the heels of the first, slightly lower, and the third after that, each one laying a band of heat across Hector's ass that layered over the last like paint. By the fifth, Hector's eyes were watering. By the eighth, his legs were shaking. By the tenth, he was gripping the far edge of the table with both hands, knuckles white, breathing through his teeth.

Vinnie stopped. "Breathe."

Hector breathed. His ass felt like it was glowing. He could feel the individual stripes, each one a distinct ridge of pain.

Then Vinnie started again.

The second set of ten was worse, because Hector knew what was coming. His body flinched before each stroke, muscles clenching, which only made it hurt more. He bit his lip. He tasted copper. Somewhere around the fifteenth stroke, he stopped counting and started just trying to survive it, face pressed against the cold metal table, making sounds he didn't recognize as his own.

Another pause. "Halfway," Vinnie said. His voice was steady. Almost conversational. Like he was reading a weather report.

Hector's briefs were damp with sweat. His whole body was damp with sweat. The table was slick beneath his chest. He could feel his heartbeat in his ass, in his thighs, in his teeth.

The third set of ten broke something in him. Not dramatically — no single stroke was the breaking point — but by the twenty-fifth crack of leather, Hector had stopped resisting. His body went slack against the table. He wasn't fighting anymore. He wasn't bracing. He was just there, taking it, and the tears were running silently down his face and pooling against the metal.

By the fiftieth stroke, he was sobbing quietly. By the seventieth, the sobs had stopped and he was just breathing, eyes open, staring at the wall, feeling each stroke land and ripple through him like a stone dropped into water that had already been disturbed beyond recognition.

When Vinnie reached one hundred, he stopped. There was no announcement. No final flourish. Just the absence of the next stroke, and then the sound of the belt being set down on the desk.

Hector didn't move. He couldn't. His ass was a landscape of pain — hot, raw, throbbing with his pulse. He lay against the table and breathed and tried to remember how his legs worked.

Then he felt Dumont's hands on his briefs.

The waistband came down. Cool air hit his skin, and for a moment that was almost a relief — until he realized what it meant. His bare ass was exposed, the cheeks still burning from the belt, and Dumont was pulling the briefs down to his thighs with the same methodical gentleness he'd used to guide him to the table.

"What —" Hector started to push himself up.

Dumont's hand pressed him back down. "Stay."

Hector heard a drawer open. Then the wet, thick sound of something being scooped. He turned his head just enough to see Vinnie stepping out of his pants, his dick already half-hard, smearing Vaseline along the shaft with two fingers. The sight of it sent a jolt through Hector that was part fear and part something else — something that lived in the base of his spine and had no name he was willing to give it.

"Please," Hector said. "Vinnie, come on. I learned my lesson. I swear. I'll pay it back, every cent, I'll —"

"Not yet you ain't," Vinnie said.

He stepped behind Hector. One hand on Hector's hip, positioning him. The head of Vinnie's dick pressed against Hector's hole — cold from the Vaseline, blunt, insistent.

Hector clenched. "Don't —"

"Relax or it's worse," Vinnie said, and pushed in.

The Vaseline helped, but not enough. Hector felt himself being opened, stretched, breached. It was a dull pressure at first, then a sharp fullness, then a deep ache that radiated upward into his lower back. Vinnie didn't pause. He pushed steadily until he was all the way in, his hips flush against Hector's sore, belted ass, and the contact made Hector hiss through his teeth.

Then Vinnie started to fuck him.

There was no other word for it. It was functional, rhythmic, almost mechanical — Vinnie's hips snapping forward in a steady cadence, hands gripping Hector's hips, breath coming in measured grunts. Like he was completing a chore. Like this was just another line item on the audit, something to be checked off and filed away.

Hector's face was pressed against the table. Each thrust pushed him forward an inch, and Dumont's hand on his back pushed him back. The rhythm was relentless. The table creaked. The coffee maker sloshed. Somewhere, a fluorescent light buzzed.

Hector's body did something he didn't expect. After the initial pain faded — or maybe didn't fade but got absorbed into the larger landscape of sensation — something shifted. The ache in his ass turned warm. His cock, trapped between his stomach and the cold metal table, began to stiffen. He could feel it pressing against the surface with each thrust, and the friction — the unintended, incidental friction — was making him harder.

He closed his eyes. He didn't want to feel it. He didn't want his body to respond. But it was responding, and the shame of that was almost worse than the belt had been.

Vinnie's pace changed. His grunts got shorter, tighter. His fingers dug into Hector's hips. And then Hector felt it — a pulse, deep inside him, hot and sudden. Vinnie groaned through his teeth and held still, and Hector realized with a shock that hit him like cold water that Vinnie wasn't wearing a condom. He'd gone in raw, and he was coming, and Hector could feel it — the spurts, the heat, the wetness flooding his insides.

"Wait —" Hector said, pushing up. "Vinnie, you didn't —"

Vinnie pulled out. His dick was glistening, softening. He wiped himself with a paper towel from the desk and tucked himself back into his pants without looking at Hector.

"Your turn," Vinnie said to Dumont.

Dumont's hand came off Hector's back. Hector heard the sound of a zipper, the wet scrape of Vaseline, and then Dumont was behind him, bigger than Vinnie — thicker, longer — and when he pushed in, Hector yelped. A real yelp, loud and unguarded, because the stretch was too much, too fast, and his ass was already sore and slick with Vinnie's load.

"I want a piece of that too," Dumont said, and his voice was deeper than Vinnie's, closer to Hector's ear, and his thrusts were slower but harder, each one bottoming out with a grunt that Hector could feel in his own chest.

Hector opened his mouth to say something — to protest, to plead, to say this was enough, this was too much — but before he could form the words, Dumont's rhythm stuttered. His breathing went ragged. He gripped Hector's shoulders and pushed in deep, and then he was coming too — adding a second load to the first, hot and thick, and Hector felt it pooling inside him, mixing, dripping down his inner thigh when Dumont finally pulled out.

Hector stayed bent over the table. He couldn't move. His ass was on fire — from the belt, from the fucking, from the rawness of it all. His briefs were around his thighs. His cock was still half-hard against the table, and he hated that most of all.

Behind him, he heard the sounds of the two men dressing. Zippers. Buckles. The rustle of polyester.

Then a sound that made his stomach turn — a high-five. The flat crack of palm against palm.

"Good session," Vinnie said.

"Nice and tight," Dumont agreed. "Good kid."

A hand landed on Hector's sore ass — a slap, casual and stinging, the kind you'd give a teammate after a good play. "Report to work tomorrow morning," Vinnie said. "Opening shift. Don't be late."

The door opened. Light from the hallway spilled in. Then it closed, and Hector was alone.

He stayed bent over the table for a long time. Minutes. His breath fogged the metal. His ass throbbed. He could feel the two loads inside him, warm and wet, slowly leaking. His cock was still hard, and eventually — because the office was empty and the door was locked and nobody would ever know — he reached down and touched himself. It took less than a minute. He came against the side of the table with a shudder that wracked his whole body, and the orgasm was so intense it hurt, pulling something out of him that he didn't know was there, leaving him empty and shaking and strangely, inexplicably calm.

He cleaned up with paper towels. He got dressed. His hands were steady now. His face was dry. He looked at himself in the dark screen of the powered-off register on the desk — hair messed, shirt wrinkled, tie missing — and he looked like someone who'd been through something, but not like someone who was broken.

He unlocked the office door and walked out through the kitchen. The restaurant was empty, closed between lunch and dinner. The roast beef smell was the same as always. The fluorescent lights buzzed the same buzz.

Hector pushed through the front door and stepped into the afternoon. The sun was out. His ass hurt. He had two loads of cum in his gut and a belt-marked backside and no five hundred dollars and a shift tomorrow at 6 a.m.

But as he walked to the bus stop, something settled in him. Not peace, exactly. More like clarity. The kind that comes after a storm passes and you realize you're still standing.

He'd pay back the money. He'd show up tomorrow. He'd take the opening shift and the ones after it, and he'd keep his head down and his register honest, and he'd get through this the way he got through everything — quietly, stubbornly, one day at a time.

And if Vinnie and Dumont thought they'd broken him, that was fine. Let them think it. Let them high-five in their little office and congratulate themselves on their conquest. Let them believe they'd taken something from him that he couldn't get back.

Hector had taken something too, though he'd never admit it out loud — not to them, not to his mother, not to anyone. He'd taken the answer to a question he'd been too afraid to ask his whole life. And the answer was complicated and messy and covered in Vaseline and shame, but it was his.

He got on the bus. He sat in the back, by the window, on the side that didn't hurt as much. The city scrolled past — storefronts, parking lots, a dog tied to a bike rack, a kid on a skateboard eating a bag of chips.

Hector watched it all and felt, beneath the soreness and the humiliation and the slow leak of cum he was very carefully not thinking about, the faintest, most infuriating spark of something that felt like anticipation.

Tomorrow. 6 a.m. Opening shift.

He'd be there.