Candlelit Intruder
by damaged_domabout 1 hour ago
•medium read•intense intensityThe fire crackled like a living thing, throwing orange shadows across the dark wooden floorboards. Candles flickered on the coffee table, their wax dripping slow and deliberate, and the incense burned rose-heavy, thick enough to taste. I was curled into the corner of the black velvet couch, legs tucked under me, the short black skirt riding up over the purple fishnet stockings. No underwear. The air was warm and close, and the book in my hands was filthy—dark romance smut, the kind where the villain always wins. My thumb traced the spine absently as I read, the heat between my thighs already a low, familiar pulse.
The clock on the mantel read 11:04.
I didn’t hear the lock click. Didn’t hear the soft shift of weight on the floorboards. The first thing I noticed was the draft—a cool ribbon of night air cutting through the rose-scented warmth. Then the floorboard behind me groaned.
I turned.
You were already there, standing just inside the lounge room, a black duffel bag slung over one shoulder, your dark hair falling across your forehead. Your eyes—God, your eyes—caught the firelight and shifted, green to grey to something almost gold. A cheeky, nonchalant expression sat on your face like you’d just walked into your own living room.
“Don’t stop on my account,” you said, voice low and rough. “Looked like you were enjoying yourself.”
My heart slammed against my ribs. “Who the fuck are you?”
“Nobody you need to worry about.” You dropped the duffel. It hit the floor with a clatter of what sounded like silver and glass. “I’m just here for the nice things.”
“Take them and go.” My voice came out steadier than I felt. “I won’t call anyone.”
You laughed, soft and dark, and stepped closer. The firelight caught the edge of your jaw, the shadow of stubble. “That’s cute. But I don’t think you want me to go.”
“I do.”
“Liar.” You tilted your head, eyes dragging down my body, lingering on the fishnets, the bare strip of thigh above them. “You’re sitting there with your legs spread, reading about monsters fucking girls, and you expect me to believe you want me gone?”
I swallowed. The book slipped from my fingers and thumped onto the couch cushion. “Please don’t hurt me.”
“I’m not going to hurt you.” You moved then, fast, one knee pressing onto the couch between my legs, your hand wrapping around my throat—not squeezing, just holding. Firm. Possessive. “I’m going to use you. And you’re going to let me.”
I should have screamed. I should have fought. Instead, my hips shifted, a tiny involuntary roll, and I felt the wetness slick against the inside of my thigh. “Please…”
“Please what?” Your thumb traced my bottom lip. “Please stop? Or please don’t stop?”
I didn’t answer. Couldn’t. You pushed me back against the arm of the couch, your body covering mine, and your free hand shoved the hoodie up over my ribs. The cool air hit my skin, and then your mouth was on my neck, teeth scraping, tongue hot. I gasped, arching into you, my fingers digging into your shoulders.
“Good girl,” you murmured against my collarbone. “Now open that pretty mouth.”
You pulled back just enough to free your cock from your jeans—thick, heavy, already slick at the tip. I stared at it, my breath coming in short, shallow bursts. You didn’t ask again. Your hand fisted in my hair, and you pushed inside, slow at first, letting me feel every inch. The taste of salt and skin filled my mouth. I moaned around you, and you groaned, hips flexing.
“That’s it. Take it all.”
You fucked my throat with a rhythm that was almost lazy, like you had all night. Tears pricked at the corners of my eyes, mascara smearing, but I didn’t pull away. I hollowed my cheeks, tongue working the underside of your shaft, and you cursed under your breath. Then you pulled out, leaving a string of spit connecting us, and flipped me onto my stomach.
The skirt rode up. The fishnets tore with a sharp rip as your fingers found my pussy, sliding through the wetness, circling my clit—exposed, sensitive, already swollen. I cried out, face pressed into the velvet cushion.
“You’re fucking soaked,” you said, almost amused. “Begging me to stop, but your cunt’s dripping down my hand.”
“Please,” I whimpered. “Please don’t.”
But my hips pushed back, grinding against your fingers, and you laughed again. Then you shoved two fingers inside me, curling hard, and I saw stars. My thighs trembled. The first orgasm hit me like a wave, sudden and violent, and I screamed into the couch, my pussy clenching around your hand.
“Already?” You pulled your fingers out, slick and glistening, and pressed them to my lips. “Taste yourself.”
I opened my mouth, sucking obediently, and you rewarded me by pressing the head of your cock against my ass. No warning. Just pressure, then a slow, burning stretch as you pushed inside. I sobbed, fingers clawing at the cushions, but the pain twisted into something else—something sharp and electric—as you bottomed out.
“Fuck,” you breathed. “Tight little hole.”
You fucked my ass with deep, deliberate strokes, one hand gripping my hip hard enough to bruise, the other reaching around to rub my clit. The dual sensation was too much. I came again, harder, my whole body shaking, and you didn’t stop. You kept pounding, grunting with each thrust, until I was babbling nonsense, tears and drool mixing on the cushion.
Then you pulled out, flipped me onto my back, and drove into my pussy in one brutal stroke. I screamed. My legs wrapped around your waist, heels digging into your ass, pulling you deeper. You fucked me like you hated me, like you wanted to break me, and I came a third time, gushing around your cock, my nails raking down your back.
“Please,” I begged, not even sure what I was asking for. “Please, please, please…”
“Please what?” You grabbed my jaw, forcing me to look at you. “Please come in your mouth? Please mark that pretty face?”
“Yes,” I sobbed. “Yes, fuck, please.”
You pulled out and straddled my chest, stroking yourself fast and rough. I opened my mouth, tongue out, and you groaned, hot cum spilling over my lips, my chin, dripping down onto my tits. I swallowed what landed on my tongue, licking greedily, and you watched me with those shifting eyes, your expression unreadable.
Then you stood, tucking yourself back into your jeans, and grabbed your duffel bag. I lay there, wrecked, covered in your cum, my body still trembling with aftershocks. You pulled something from your pocket—a small black card—and tossed it onto the coffee table.
“If you want more,” you said, voice casual, “call that number.”
I looked down. The card had a phone number embossed in silver, and beneath it, a folded slip of paper. I reached for it with shaking hands and unfolded it. A contract. Lines and lines of small print, with words like “submission,” “limits,” “ownership” scattered throughout.
By the time I looked up, you were gone.
The front door clicked shut. The fire crackled. The incense burned low. And I lay there, used and aching, my body already craving the next time. My fingers curled around the card, pressing it to my chest, and I smiled—a slow, wicked smile that showed the snaggle tooth on the top left.
I didn’t know your name. I didn’t know if you’d stolen anything valuable. But you’d left me something far more dangerous than silver or glass.
A reason to say yes.
The clock on the mantel read 11:04.
I didn’t hear the lock click. Didn’t hear the soft shift of weight on the floorboards. The first thing I noticed was the draft—a cool ribbon of night air cutting through the rose-scented warmth. Then the floorboard behind me groaned.
I turned.
You were already there, standing just inside the lounge room, a black duffel bag slung over one shoulder, your dark hair falling across your forehead. Your eyes—God, your eyes—caught the firelight and shifted, green to grey to something almost gold. A cheeky, nonchalant expression sat on your face like you’d just walked into your own living room.
“Don’t stop on my account,” you said, voice low and rough. “Looked like you were enjoying yourself.”
My heart slammed against my ribs. “Who the fuck are you?”
“Nobody you need to worry about.” You dropped the duffel. It hit the floor with a clatter of what sounded like silver and glass. “I’m just here for the nice things.”
“Take them and go.” My voice came out steadier than I felt. “I won’t call anyone.”
You laughed, soft and dark, and stepped closer. The firelight caught the edge of your jaw, the shadow of stubble. “That’s cute. But I don’t think you want me to go.”
“I do.”
“Liar.” You tilted your head, eyes dragging down my body, lingering on the fishnets, the bare strip of thigh above them. “You’re sitting there with your legs spread, reading about monsters fucking girls, and you expect me to believe you want me gone?”
I swallowed. The book slipped from my fingers and thumped onto the couch cushion. “Please don’t hurt me.”
“I’m not going to hurt you.” You moved then, fast, one knee pressing onto the couch between my legs, your hand wrapping around my throat—not squeezing, just holding. Firm. Possessive. “I’m going to use you. And you’re going to let me.”
I should have screamed. I should have fought. Instead, my hips shifted, a tiny involuntary roll, and I felt the wetness slick against the inside of my thigh. “Please…”
“Please what?” Your thumb traced my bottom lip. “Please stop? Or please don’t stop?”
I didn’t answer. Couldn’t. You pushed me back against the arm of the couch, your body covering mine, and your free hand shoved the hoodie up over my ribs. The cool air hit my skin, and then your mouth was on my neck, teeth scraping, tongue hot. I gasped, arching into you, my fingers digging into your shoulders.
“Good girl,” you murmured against my collarbone. “Now open that pretty mouth.”
You pulled back just enough to free your cock from your jeans—thick, heavy, already slick at the tip. I stared at it, my breath coming in short, shallow bursts. You didn’t ask again. Your hand fisted in my hair, and you pushed inside, slow at first, letting me feel every inch. The taste of salt and skin filled my mouth. I moaned around you, and you groaned, hips flexing.
“That’s it. Take it all.”
You fucked my throat with a rhythm that was almost lazy, like you had all night. Tears pricked at the corners of my eyes, mascara smearing, but I didn’t pull away. I hollowed my cheeks, tongue working the underside of your shaft, and you cursed under your breath. Then you pulled out, leaving a string of spit connecting us, and flipped me onto my stomach.
The skirt rode up. The fishnets tore with a sharp rip as your fingers found my pussy, sliding through the wetness, circling my clit—exposed, sensitive, already swollen. I cried out, face pressed into the velvet cushion.
“You’re fucking soaked,” you said, almost amused. “Begging me to stop, but your cunt’s dripping down my hand.”
“Please,” I whimpered. “Please don’t.”
But my hips pushed back, grinding against your fingers, and you laughed again. Then you shoved two fingers inside me, curling hard, and I saw stars. My thighs trembled. The first orgasm hit me like a wave, sudden and violent, and I screamed into the couch, my pussy clenching around your hand.
“Already?” You pulled your fingers out, slick and glistening, and pressed them to my lips. “Taste yourself.”
I opened my mouth, sucking obediently, and you rewarded me by pressing the head of your cock against my ass. No warning. Just pressure, then a slow, burning stretch as you pushed inside. I sobbed, fingers clawing at the cushions, but the pain twisted into something else—something sharp and electric—as you bottomed out.
“Fuck,” you breathed. “Tight little hole.”
You fucked my ass with deep, deliberate strokes, one hand gripping my hip hard enough to bruise, the other reaching around to rub my clit. The dual sensation was too much. I came again, harder, my whole body shaking, and you didn’t stop. You kept pounding, grunting with each thrust, until I was babbling nonsense, tears and drool mixing on the cushion.
Then you pulled out, flipped me onto my back, and drove into my pussy in one brutal stroke. I screamed. My legs wrapped around your waist, heels digging into your ass, pulling you deeper. You fucked me like you hated me, like you wanted to break me, and I came a third time, gushing around your cock, my nails raking down your back.
“Please,” I begged, not even sure what I was asking for. “Please, please, please…”
“Please what?” You grabbed my jaw, forcing me to look at you. “Please come in your mouth? Please mark that pretty face?”
“Yes,” I sobbed. “Yes, fuck, please.”
You pulled out and straddled my chest, stroking yourself fast and rough. I opened my mouth, tongue out, and you groaned, hot cum spilling over my lips, my chin, dripping down onto my tits. I swallowed what landed on my tongue, licking greedily, and you watched me with those shifting eyes, your expression unreadable.
Then you stood, tucking yourself back into your jeans, and grabbed your duffel bag. I lay there, wrecked, covered in your cum, my body still trembling with aftershocks. You pulled something from your pocket—a small black card—and tossed it onto the coffee table.
“If you want more,” you said, voice casual, “call that number.”
I looked down. The card had a phone number embossed in silver, and beneath it, a folded slip of paper. I reached for it with shaking hands and unfolded it. A contract. Lines and lines of small print, with words like “submission,” “limits,” “ownership” scattered throughout.
By the time I looked up, you were gone.
The front door clicked shut. The fire crackled. The incense burned low. And I lay there, used and aching, my body already craving the next time. My fingers curled around the card, pressing it to my chest, and I smiled—a slow, wicked smile that showed the snaggle tooth on the top left.
I didn’t know your name. I didn’t know if you’d stolen anything valuable. But you’d left me something far more dangerous than silver or glass.
A reason to say yes.