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The A-frame chalet squatted like a forgotten wizard's hat in the heart of the pine-choked woods, its sharp roof dusted with a fresh layer of snow that made the eaves groan under the weight. Winter had

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The A-frame chalet squatted like a forgotten wizard's hat in the heart of the pine-choked woods, its sharp roof dusted with a fresh layer of snow that made the eaves groan under the weight. Winter had clamped down hard, turning the mountain pass into a white labyrinth where even the crows seemed to bitch about the cold. Cindy’s dad, ever the planner, had booked this spot for her college graduation bash—a ski trip to celebrate her escape from textbooks and into the "real world," as he put it. But the real world had other ideas. A snowstorm had roared through two days ago, burying the roads and stranding the rest of the party, including Cindy's boyfriend, in some godforsaken motel down the valley.

Cindy and her dad had made it up first, their SUV fishtailing the last mile before the tires finally bit into the plowed drive. The chalet was cozy in that rustic way—logs stacked high for the massive stone fireplace downstairs, a kitchen crammed with enough canned goods to survive a zombie apocalypse, and a loft overhead reached by a creaky wooden ladder. The loft was Gary's domain, her dad's old army buddy who rolled in late that first afternoon, his pickup truck kicking up snow like a pissed-off bull. Gary hauled in a duffel and a case of beer, clapping her dad on the back with a grin that split his salt-and-pepper beard.

Cindy had known Gary forever—summer barbecues, holidays where he'd tell war stories that made her dad laugh and her roll her eyes. But now, at twenty-two, fresh out of school with a degree in graphic design and a body that had finally caught up to her curiosity, she saw him differently. Gary was built like a goddamn oak tree, broad shoulders from years of hauling gear in the desert, arms corded with muscle that flexed when he tossed logs into the fire. His eyes, sharp blue under those thick brows, lingered on her a beat too long when she bent to grab a soda from the cooler. Compared to her boyfriend, Tim—skinny, awkward Tim who fumbled through makeout sessions like he was defusing a bomb—Gary was a revelation. A walking, talking promise of something raw and unfiltered.

The first night passed in a haze of board games and bourbon by the fire. The storm howled outside, rattling the windows, but inside, the flames danced high, casting shadows that played tricks on the walls. Cindy caught herself staring at Gary's hands as he shuffled cards—big, callused things that could probably crush walnuts or, hell, make a girl forget her own name. Her dad crashed early, snoring on the pullout couch downstairs, leaving Cindy and Gary to poke at the embers. "You turned into quite the woman, Cin," Gary said, his voice low and gravelly, like tires on fresh gravel. She felt a flush creep up her neck, not from the heat, but from the way his gaze traced her leggings-clad legs.

By the second day, the isolation started to weave its spell. No cell service, no Wi-Fi, just the three of them snowed in with a generator humming faintly in the shed. Her dad spent the morning shoveling the deck, grumbling about the drifts, while Cindy and Gary tackled breakfast. She chopped onions, hyper-aware of his body heat as he reached past her for the salt. "Careful there, killer," he teased when her knife slipped, his hand steadying hers. The touch lingered, electric, sending a jolt straight to her core. Cindy's body, usually a distant acquaintance in her limited romps with Tim, woke up like it had been hibernating. Her nipples tightened under her sweater, a insistent ache building between her thighs as she imagined those hands elsewhere—gripping, exploring.

Afternoon brought a snowball fight that devolved into laughter and breathless chases through the yard. Gary scooped her up once, tossing her into a snowbank with a roar, his weight pinning her for a split second. She felt the hard line of him against her hip, and her mind reeled. Tim had never felt like that—solid, demanding. That night, over venison stew her dad whipped up, Gary mentioned offhand to him, "Man, after all those deployments, I can't stand clothes in bed. Feels like being back in the barracks." Cindy pretended not to hear, but the words lodged in her brain like a splinter, itching.

The third day dawned brighter, the storm's fury spent, but the roads were still impassable. Her dad declared a lazy day, cracking open a book by the fire while Cindy feigned interest in a magazine upstairs. But her thoughts circled Gary like vultures. She pictured him up in the loft, stripped bare under the quilts, his body sprawled out in the moonlight filtering through the skylight. The chalet's layout amplified everything—the loft overlooked the main room like a perch, close enough to hear the crackle of the fire but private enough for secrets. By evening, with her dad dozing again, the pull became unbearable. Cindy waited until the clock ticked past midnight, the fire reduced to glowing coals that painted the room in flickering reds and golds. Her heart hammered as she slipped on wool socks and tiptoed to the ladder, the wood cool under her palms.

The loft smelled of pine and man—Gary's cologne mixed with the faint musk of sweat from the day's exertions. Moonlight slanted through the window, illuminating the rumpled bed where he lay on his back, one arm thrown over his head. The blanket had slipped low, but she remembered his words. Emboldened, pulse racing, Cindy knelt beside the bed and grasped the edge of the quilt. She tugged it down slowly, inch by inch, revealing him. Gary slept naked, just as promised—his chest rising and falling steadily, dusted with dark hair that trailed down to a thatch at his groin. His cock lay soft against his thigh, thick even in repose, nestled in the V of his hips. Cindy's breath caught; she'd seen Tim's, sure, but this was different—real, potent, like the rest of him.

Her sexual awakening hit like a freight train. Hands trembling, she reached out, tracing the line of his collarbone with tentative fingers. His skin was warm, alive under her touch, and she explored lower, palms gliding over the ridges of his abs, the coarse hair tickling her skin. Gary stirred faintly but didn't wake. Emboldened, Cindy let her hand drift to his cock, wrapping her fingers around the soft length. It twitched in her grip, growing heavier as she stroked, base to tip, feeling it swell. Her pussy clenched in response, a slick heat building that made her shift on her knees. She'd never done this—not really. Tim got handjobs that ended in awkward fumbles, but this? This was instinct, raw and hungry.

Gary's cock hardened fully under her ministrations, veins standing out along the shaft, the head flushing purple. Cindy leaned in, her breath ghosting over it, and parted her lips. The first taste was salt and skin, her tongue flicking experimentally along the underside. She took him into her mouth then, sucking gently, her hand pumping what she couldn't fit. The sensation overwhelmed her—hot, velvety, filling her mouth in a way that made her clit throb. She bobbed her head, saliva slicking him, her free hand slipping under her waistband to rub her soaked folds. Gary groaned in his sleep, hips bucking slightly, and that's when his eyes snapped open.

"Cin? What the fuck—" Gary's voice was rough with sleep and shock, his hand flying to her shoulder to push her away. But she didn't stop; she sucked harder, tongue swirling around the head, her fist twisting at the base. His protest died in a hiss, body betraying him as pleasure overrode reason. "Jesus, kid, you can't—oh shit." His fingers tangled in her hair, not pulling her off but holding her there, shock morphing into lust as his cock pulsed against her throat. Cindy's inexperience showed—she gagged when he thrust involuntarily, but she powered through, hollowing her cheeks, the wet sounds echoing in the loft.

Gary's resistance crumbled like snow in a thaw. "Fuck, your mouth... so goddamn eager," he muttered, voice thick. His hips rolled up, fucking her face now, the initial surprise burning away into pure need. Cindy's jaw ached, tears pricking her eyes from the gag, but the power of it—the way he swelled, the salty pre-cum coating her tongue—drove her wild. Her fingers plunged into her pussy, matching his rhythm, until he tensed, a guttural "Cindy, I'm—" cutting off as he came.

Hot spurts flooded her mouth, thick and bitter, more than she expected. Cindy gagged hard, cum spilling from her lips as she tried to swallow, choking on the volume. It dripped down her chin, onto her sweater, but she milked him through it, hand squeezing every last drop. Gary shuddered, collapsing back, his chest heaving. "Holy shit," he panted, eyes wide in the dim light. Surprise lingered, but so did the arousal, his cock still twitching half-hard in her grip.

Cindy wiped her mouth, cum-smeared and unashamed, her body on fire. "Gary, please... I need you to fuck me. I've never—Tim's nothing like this. You're... fuck, you're everything." Her voice was a plea, pussy aching empty, clit swollen and begging. Gary stared, then hauled her up, kissing her fiercely, tasting himself on her tongue. "You sure about this, Cin? Once we start..." She nodded, stripping off her clothes with frantic hands—sweater, bra, leggings pooling at her feet. Her body was lithe, breasts full and peaked, a neatly trimmed patch above her dripping slit.

Gary's shock fully surrendered to lust then, his hands roaming her curves, pinching nipples until she gasped. "Alright, baby, but we're doing this right. Climb on—ride me like you mean it." He guided her over his lap, his cock rigid again, slapping against her thigh. Cindy straddled him, knees digging into the mattress, and he held her hips, rubbing the head along her slick pussy lips. "Feel that? That's what you've been teasing out of me." She sank down slowly, inch by inch, the stretch burning sweet. "Oh god, Gary—it's so big, filling me up." Her walls clenched around him, virgin-tight from her limited experience, every ridge dragging delicious friction.

He thrust up gently at first, teaching her the rhythm. "That's it, grind on my dick—fuck, you're so wet." Cindy's hands braced on his chest, nails digging in as she rose and fell, the slap of skin filling the loft. They kissed then, messy and deep, tongues dueling like they were claiming territory—hers exploring his mouth, tasting whiskey and want, his sucking on her lower lip until it bruised. Gary's hands searched her body, one palming her ass, fingers teasing the cleft, the other rolling her clit in firm circles. "You like that, huh? Riding this cock like a pro already."

The dirty talk spilled from them both, unfiltered. "Fuck me harder, Gary—make my pussy yours," Cindy moaned, her hips snapping faster, breasts bouncing. He growled, "Gonna ruin you for that boy—fill this tight little cunt with cum." She came first, shattering around him, walls fluttering as pleasure ripped through her, a gush of wetness soaking his balls. "Yes—oh fuck, yes!" But she didn't stop, chasing more, her body awakening fully—every nerve singing, pussy greedy for the stretch.

Gary flipped them halfway, pinning her beneath him without pulling out, pounding deeper. "Second one's mine to teach," he rasped, sucking marks into her neck. Cindy's legs wrapped around him, heels digging into his ass, urging him on. She came again, harder, squirting a little against his thrusts, the wet mess slicking their join. "Gary—cum in me, please, I want it all." His control snapped; with a roar, he buried deep, cock erupting inside her. Thick ropes of cum painted her walls, hot and endless, leaking out around him as he ground through the aftershocks. "Take it, Cin—every fucking drop in that pussy."

They collapsed, tangled and spent, his weight a comforting press. Cum trickled from her, pooling on the sheets, a sticky testament. Downstairs, the fire popped faintly, her dad none the wiser. As dawn crept in, Gary chuckled low. "Well, shit—graduation gift from hell. If Tim shows up, tell him the storm brought more than snow." Cindy smirked, tracing his jaw. "Screw Tim. This chalet's got the best view in the woods."

But the real punchline came two days later when the roads cleared and the party finally arrived. Tim burst in, arms loaded with luggage, oblivious as ever. "Babe! Sorry for the delay—traffic was a nightmare." Cindy, freshly showered but still glowing, shot Gary a wink across the room. Her dad clapped Tim on the back, oblivious, while Gary stoked the fire with that same knowing grin. As the group settled in, Cindy slipped Gary a note: "Loft tonight? Storm's over, but I'm just getting started." The chalet, it turned out, wasn't done with its secrets yet.