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Whispers in the Rain's Rhythm

by esteban_cara_de_sexo

The rain comes down harder, drumming against the window like an impatient lover tapping their nails against glass. The apartment feels smaller, the air thicker, like the walls are holding their breath

about 3 hours ago
long readintense intensity
The rain comes down harder, drumming against the window like an impatient lover tapping their nails against glass. The apartment feels smaller, the air thicker, like the walls are holding their breath. Madison’s fingers twitch against her crossed arms, the denim jacket straining over the swell of her chest as she exhales through her nose. The burgundy dye in her hair catches the lamplight, glinting like dried wine stains.

Stephen’s boots squeak on the tile again, a nervous habit, his thumb hooked into his pocket like he’s trying to keep himself from bolting. He glances at Lauren, who’s still standing between them, her henley riding up just enough to expose the soft curve of her stomach. Her fingers twist together, knuckles white.

Lauren swallows hard, her throat working. “I didn’t— I didn’t mean for it to be like this.”

Madison’s lips curl into something that isn’t quite a smile. “Then what did you mean?”

Stephen shifts, his field jacket rustling. “Lauren called me. Said she wanted to talk.”

Madison’s eyes flick to him, dark and sharp. “And you just *showed up*.”

“She asked me to.”

“You could’ve said no.”

“And you could’ve not been a dick about it,” Stephen shoots back, his calm facade cracking just enough to let irritation through.

Madison’s jaw tightens. The scar above her eyebrow whitens as she clenches. “I don’t give a fuck what you think.”

Lauren’s breath hitches. She steps forward, her bare foot pressing into the tile. “Madison—”

“No.” Madison’s voice is low, controlled, but the word lands like a slap. “You called him. You *wanted* him here.”

Lauren’s face flushes, the freckles across her nose standing out darker. “That’s not— It’s not like that.”

“Then what’s it like?” Madison’s gaze burns into Lauren, intense and unyielding. “Because from where I’m standing, it looks like you’d rather have *him* than me.”

Stephen exhales sharply, running a hand through his sandy blond hair. “Jesus, Mads. Lay off.”

Madison doesn’t look at him. Her focus stays locked on Lauren, her chest rising and falling with controlled breaths. “Answer me.”

Lauren’s fingers dig into the hem of her henley. “It’s not about you.”

“Bullshit.” Madison pushes off the island, her boots thudding against the floor as she closes the distance between them. She’s taller, broader, her presence filling the space. “You wouldn’t have called him if it wasn’t.”

Lauren’s back hits the couch, her breath coming faster. “Madison, please—”

“Please what?” Madison’s voice drops, rough with something raw and hungry. “Please don’t be jealous? Please don’t care? Please pretend you don’t still *fucking want me*?”

Lauren’s lips part, a shuddering breath escaping. “I do want you.”

Madison’s eyes darken, her hand lifting to cup Lauren’s jaw, thumb brushing over her flushed cheek. “Then why the fuck is he here?”

Stephen clears his throat, shifting uncomfortably. “I should go.”

“Stay.” The word is a command, sharp and final.

Stephen hesitates, but something in Madison’s tone keeps him rooted in place.

Lauren’s heart pounds against her ribs, her skin burning under Madison’s touch. She wants to say something—anything—but the words dissolve under the weight of Madison’s gaze.

Madison’s fingers tighten, tilting Lauren’s chin up. “Tell me to leave.”

Lauren’s breath catches. “What?”

“Tell me to walk out that door and never come back.” Madison’s thumb drags over Lauren’s bottom lip, pulling it down just enough to tease. “But if you do, I won’t.”

Lauren’s eyes flutter closed, her body trembling. “I don’t want you to leave.”

Madison’s grip softens, her fingers sliding into Lauren’s hair, tilting her head back. “Good.”

The tension in the room shifts, thickening with something darker, hungrier. Stephen watches, his pulse quickening as Madison’s free hand slides down Lauren’s side, fingers hooking into the waistband of her cotton shorts.

Lauren gasps, her hips jerking forward involuntarily.

Madison’s lips curl into a slow, predatory smile. “You like that?”

Lauren’s voice is barely a whisper. “Yes.”

Madison’s hand tightens in Lauren’s hair, pulling just enough to make her gasp. “Then take off your shirt.”

Lauren’s fingers fumble at the hem of her henley, dragging it up and over her head in one jerky motion. The cool air hits her bare skin, her nipples already hard, aching.

Madison’s gaze rakes over her, dark and possessive. “Fuck.”

Stephen shifts again, his cock thickening in his pants. He’s seen Lauren naked before, but never like this—not with Madison looking at her like she’s the only thing in the room worth seeing.

Madison’s hand slides down Lauren’s chest, fingers tracing the soft swell of her breasts before pinching one nipple hard enough to make Lauren cry out. “You like it when I touch you?”

Lauren whimpers, nodding.

Madison’s mouth crashes into hers, hungry and demanding, her tongue forcing its way past Lauren’s lips. The kiss is brutal, possessive, Madison’s teeth nipping at Lauren’s bottom lip before soothing the sting with her tongue. Lauren’s hands fly to Madison’s jacket, shoving it off her shoulders before dragging her tank up and over her head.

Madison breaks the kiss just long enough to yank the tank off, her bra following quickly after. Lauren’s bare chest presses against hers, skin to skin, Madison’s hard nipples rubbing against Lauren’s softer ones. Madison’s hands grip Lauren’s ass, hauling her up against her body, their hips grinding together.

Stephen’s breath hitches, his cock straining against his khakis. He watches as Madison’s mouth trails down Lauren’s neck, teeth scraping over her pulse point before sucking hard enough to leave a mark.

Lauren moans, her fingers tangling in Madison’s short, burgundy-dyed hair. “God, Madison—”

Madison’s answer is a growl, her hands sliding under Lauren’s shorts, fingers hooking into the waistband and dragging them down her hips. Lauren steps out of them, kicking them aside, leaving her completely bare.

Madison’s eyes darken as she takes in the sight of Lauren’s glistening pussy, already wet and aching. “Fucking hell.”

Stephen can’t take it anymore. He steps forward, his hands going to Lauren’s waist before he even realizes what he’s doing. Madison’s head snaps up, her eyes locking onto his with a warning glare.

Stephen freezes. “Sorry.”

Madison’s grip on Lauren’s ass tightens. “Don’t.”

Lauren’s breath comes in shallow gasps, her body trembling between them. Madison’s fingers slide between her thighs, parting her lips before dipping inside. Lauren’s hips jerk forward, a broken moan spilling from her lips.

“You’re *soaked*,” Madison murmurs against Lauren’s ear, her fingers curling inside her. “You like having us both watch you, don’t you?”

Lauren nods, her nails digging into Madison’s shoulders.

Madison pulls her fingers free, glistening with Lauren’s arousal, before bringing them to her own mouth. She sucks them clean, her eyes never leaving Lauren’s. “Tastes like *fucking heaven*.”

Lauren whimpers, her thighs trembling.

Madison’s hands slide up Lauren’s body, pushing her back onto the couch before kneeling between her spread thighs. Lauren’s legs fall open without hesitation, her pussy dripping and needy.

Madison doesn’t waste time. Her mouth crashes down onto Lauren’s cunt, tongue flattening against her clit before swirling in tight, demanding circles. Lauren’s back arches off the couch, a keening cry tearing from her throat.

Stephen watches, transfixed, his cock aching as Madison’s tongue works Lauren over with ruthless precision. Lauren’s fingers twist in Madison’s hair, her hips bucking against Madison’s face.

Madison growls against her, her free hand sliding up Lauren’s body to pinch one nipple, twisting just enough to make Lauren scream.

“You like that?” Madison murmurs, pulling back just enough to speak. “You like my mouth on you while *he* watches?”

Lauren nods frantically, her thighs trembling around Madison’s head.

Madison’s tongue spears into Lauren’s pussy, fucking her with slow, deep strokes before retreating to her clit again. She alternates between the two, driving Lauren higher and higher until her entire body is taut, her moans turning desperate.

Stephen can’t hold back anymore. He steps closer, his hand going to his belt before unbuckling it. His cock springs free, hard and leaking, the head already flushed dark.

Madison’s eyes flick up, locking onto Stephen’s as she spears two fingers into Lauren’s cunt, curling them just right. Lauren’s back arches off the couch, a broken scream tearing from her lips as she comes, her pussy clenching around Madison’s fingers.

Madison doesn’t stop. She keeps fucking Lauren through her orgasm, her tongue never leaving Lauren’s clit, drawing out her pleasure until Lauren is a trembling, whimpering mess beneath her.

Only then does Madison pull back, her lips glistening with Lauren’s arousal. She licks them clean, her eyes dark and satisfied.

Stephen’s cock is a fucking iron bar in his hand, his hips jerking forward on their own. Madison’s gaze flicks to him, her lips curling into a smirk.

“You want a turn?”

Stephen doesn’t answer. He drops to his knees beside the couch, his mouth crashing into Lauren’s before she can even catch her breath. His tongue is rough, demanding, tasting himself on her lips before plunging into her mouth.

Lauren moans into the kiss, her hands flying to Stephen’s hair as he devours her.

Madison watches for a moment before her hands slide up Lauren’s body, cupping her breasts, pinching her nipples as Stephen kisses her. Then, with a smirk, Madison’s fingers slide down Lauren’s body again, dipping between her thighs.

Lauren gasps into Stephen’s mouth as Madison’s fingers find her already-sensitive clit, circling it with ruthless precision.

Stephen breaks the kiss, his breath ragged. “Fuck, she’s tight.”

Madison’s fingers work Lauren’s clit faster, her voice a low purr. “You like that? You like knowing I just made her come all over my face?”

Stephen groans, his hips jerking forward. “Yeah.”

Madison’s free hand slides down Stephen’s back, her fingers hooking into the waistband of his khakis before dragging them down his hips. His cock springs free, hard and dripping, the head flushed dark.

Madison’s lips curl into a smirk as she wraps her hand around his shaft, stroking him slow and firm. “You gonna fuck her?”

Stephen’s breath hitches. “Yeah.”

Madison’s hand tightens around his cock before guiding him to Lauren’s entrance. Lauren’s legs fall open wider, her pussy glistening and needy.

Stephen doesn’t hesitate. He lines himself up and thrusts inside in one deep, claiming stroke.

Lauren screams, her back arching off the couch as Stephen bottoms out inside her. Madison’s fingers never stop working Lauren’s clit, her touch relentless.

“Fuck,” Stephen grits out, his hips snapping forward in short, punishing strokes. “She’s *so* tight.”

Madison’s smirk turns feral. “That’s because I just ate her out. She’s *dripping* for you.”

Stephen’s groan is guttural, his thrusts growing harder, more desperate. Lauren’s moans fill the room, her body trembling between them.

Madison’s fingers work Lauren’s clit faster, her own arousal dripping down her thighs as she watches Stephen fuck Lauren with brutal, relentless strokes.

“You like that?” Madison murmurs, her breath hot against Lauren’s ear. “You like knowing he’s fucking you because I told him to?”

Lauren’s answer is a broken scream as her second orgasm crashes over her, her pussy clenching around Stephen’s cock so tight he curses, his thrusts turning erratic.

Stephen’s rhythm falters, his cock twitching inside Lauren as he comes with a groan, his cum filling her in thick, hot pulses.

Madison’s fingers never stop working Lauren’s clit, drawing out her pleasure until Lauren is a trembling, whimpering mess beneath them.

Only then does Madison pull her fingers free, bringing them to her mouth to suck them clean. She licks her lips, her eyes dark with satisfaction.

Stephen collapses beside Lauren, his chest heaving as he tries to catch his breath. Lauren’s body is a boneless, trembling mess, her skin flushed and glistening with sweat.

Madison’s fingers trail down Lauren’s body, dipping between her thighs to scoop up some of Stephen’s cum before bringing it to Lauren’s lips. “Taste yourself on him.”

Lauren’s lips part, her tongue darting out to lick Madison’s fingers clean. The taste of Stephen’s cum mixed with her own arousal makes her moan, her thighs trembling.

Madison’s smirk is dark, satisfied. “Good girl.”

Stephen’s breath hitches, his cock already twitching again at the sight of Lauren licking Madison’s fingers clean.

Madison’s hand slides down Lauren’s body, her fingers dipping between her thighs again. “You want more?”

Lauren’s breath comes in shallow gasps, her body already aching for it. “Yes.”

Madison’s lips curl into a smirk. “Then get on your knees.”

Lauren doesn’t hesitate. She slides off the couch, dropping to her knees between Madison and Stephen. Madison’s hand goes to the back of her head, guiding her forward.

“Open your mouth.”

Lauren does, her tongue darting out to taste the pre-cum already beading at the tip of Stephen’s cock.

Madison’s grip tightens in Lauren’s hair, her voice a dark purr. “That’s it. Suck him clean.”

Lauren’s lips wrap around Stephen’s shaft, her tongue swirling around the head before taking him deeper. Stephen groans, his hips jerking forward instinctively.

Madison watches, her free hand sliding down to stroke her own clit as Lauren sucks Stephen’s cock with slow, deliberate strokes. Her fingers work herself in time with Lauren’s movements, her breath coming in shallow pants.

“Fuck, she’s *good* at that,” Stephen grits out, his hips snapping forward in shallow thrusts.

Madison’s smirk turns feral. “I know.”

Her fingers work her clit faster, her own arousal dripping down her thighs as she watches Lauren take Stephen’s cock deeper, her throat working around him.

Stephen’s groan is guttural, his thrusts growing erratic. “I’m gonna—”

Madison’s grip tightens in Lauren’s hair, pulling her back just enough to speak. “Swallow.”

Lauren’s lips tighten around Stephen’s cock as he comes, his cum flooding her mouth in thick, hot pulses. She swallows every drop, her tongue cleaning him clean before pulling back with a satisfied sigh.

Madison’s fingers work her clit faster, her own orgasm crashing over her with a broken moan. Her cum drips down her thighs, her body trembling as pleasure wracks her frame.

Stephen collapses back onto the couch, his chest heaving as he tries to catch his breath. Lauren stays on her knees, her lips swollen and glistening with cum.

Madison’s hand slides down Lauren’s back, pulling her up against her body. She presses a slow, deep kiss to Lauren’s lips, tasting Stephen on her tongue.

When she pulls back, her smirk is dark, satisfied. “Good girl.”

Lauren’s breath hitches, her body still trembling with aftershocks.

Madison’s fingers trail down Lauren’s body, dipping between her thighs to scoop up some of the mess between her