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The garage smelled like rubber mats and sweat, that particular mix that clings to the air after a serious workout. I'd just finished my third set of pull-ups when you walked in, and I knew immediately

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The garage smelled like rubber mats and sweat, that particular mix that clings to the air after a serious workout. I'd just finished my third set of pull-ups when you walked in, and I knew immediately something was different. You had that look—the half-lidded one, the one that makes my pulse kick up before my brain even catches up.

Barb was behind you, carrying a folding chair like she'd been invited to a show. Which, I realized pretty damn fast, she had been.

"Set it up over there," you told her, pointing to the corner near the weight rack. Not asking. Telling. The way you always tell.

Barb's cheeks were already pink. She unfolded the chair and sat down, tucking her hands in her lap like she was at a lecture, except this lecture had a very different syllabus. She glanced at me, then away, then back again. I recognized that look on her face—curiosity mixed with something she didn't want to fully admit to. I'd seen it before, the last time you'd had her watch us. The memory hit me like a shot of adrenaline: you on top of me in the living room, Barb's wide eyes, the way you'd pinned my wrists and made me work for every breath.

I was already half-hard just standing there, shirtless, sweat running down my chest. You noticed. Of course you noticed. You notice everything.

"You're not done yet," you said, nodding at the pull-up bar. "Two more sets."

"I thought we were—"

"You thought wrong." That smirk. God, that smirk. It spread across your face like you knew exactly what it did to me, which you did, because you'd been using it against me for weeks. "Barb didn't come all this way to watch you slack off."

Barb shifted in her chair but didn't leave. I caught her looking at my abs, the way the sweat caught the overhead light. I should've felt weird about it. I didn't. That was the thing about your arrangement—it blurred lines I used to think were solid, and somehow that made everything sharper.

I grabbed the bar and pulled. My lats burned, my shoulders screaming from the earlier sets, but I pushed through because you were watching and because stopping wasn't something you tolerated. I got through eight clean reps, dropped down, and shook out my arms.

"Good," you said. You stepped closer. You were wearing those black compression shorts that hug your thighs and a sports bra that left nothing to the imagination. Your body was ridiculous—forty-five years old and you could put women half your age to shame. Lean, cut, every muscle defined without losing the curves that made my mouth go dry. "Now come here."

I walked toward you, and you met me halfway. Your hand came up and pressed flat against my chest, right over my heart, which was hammering like it wanted to jump through my ribs. You felt it. Your eyebrow lifted.

"Nervous?"

"You know I'm not nervous."

"Then what is this?" Your fingers spread across my pecs, pressing lightly. Your palm was cool against my overheated skin, and the contrast made me suck in a breath.

"You know exactly what it is."

Your smirk deepened. You turned your head slightly toward Barb. "See how his heart jumps? That's not the workout. That's me."

Barb let out a small, nervous laugh. "I can see that."

You moved your hand from my chest to the back of my neck, fingers curling into the muscle there. You pulled me down slightly, and I went, because fighting you was pointless and because some part of me didn't want to fight you at all, even when it drove me crazy. Your mouth came close to my ear.

"Take off your shorts," you whispered, but loud enough that Barb could hear it too. That was deliberate. Everything you did was deliberate.

I straightened up and looked at you. Your eyes were steady, that hungry look I knew so well, the one that said you were going to take exactly what you wanted and I was going to give it to you. My jaw tightened. I hooked my thumbs into the waistband of my shorts and pushed them down, stepping out of them. No underwear. I hadn't bothered because you'd told me not to last time, and apparently the habit stuck.

I stood there in nothing but my running shoes, sweat cooling on my skin, my dick already standing at attention because my body had learned to respond to you like a Pavlovian bell. Your gaze dropped, and you took your time looking. You always took your time.

"Shoes too," you said.

I kicked them off. The concrete floor was cold under my bare feet. I was completely naked now, in my own garage, with you standing in front of me fully clothed and Barb sitting six feet away trying very hard not to stare and failing completely.

"Better," you said. You circled me slowly, and I felt your eyes on me like a physical thing—across my shoulders, down my back, over my ass, back around to my chest and stomach and lower. You stopped in front of me again. "You look good like this. Vulnerable."

"I'm not vulnerable."

You laughed, short and genuine. "Larry, you're naked and hard in front of your neighbor. You're the definition of vulnerable."

I couldn't argue with that.

You reached out and wrapped your hand around my dick, and the contact after all that buildup was almost enough to buckle my knees. Your grip was firm, controlled, the way you did everything. You gave me two slow strokes, base to tip, and I groaned before I could stop myself.

"Quiet," you said. "Let her watch."

I bit down on my lip. Your hand moved again, slow, deliberate, thumb pressing along the underside where I was most sensitive. My hips pushed forward involuntarily, chasing the sensation, and you immediately pulled your hand away.

"Did I tell you to move?"

"No."

"Then don't."

I exhaled hard through my nose. You stepped back and crossed your arms, looking at me with that appraising expression, like you were deciding what to do with a Christmas present you'd already unwrapped. Then you reached behind your back and unclasped your sports bra, pulling it off in one smooth motion. Your breasts were full and firm, nipples already tight, and the sight of you topless in the garage light made my cock twitch visibly. You noticed and smiled.

"Eager," you said.

"You're killing me."

"I haven't even started."

You pushed your compression shorts down, and of course you weren't wearing anything underneath either. You stepped out of them and stood there, and I let myself look because you wanted me to. Your body was insane—the defined abs, the cut of your obliques, the V that pointed down to where you were neatly trimmed. Your thighs were thick with muscle, the kind that came from years of squats and deadlifts and whatever else you did to build a body that could overpower mine without breaking a sweat.

You moved to the workout bench in the center of the garage and sat on the edge, legs spread. The position was deliberate. Everything about you was deliberate.

"Come here," you said, and I did, walking the few steps to stand between your knees. You reached up and grabbed my hips, pulling me closer, and then you leaned forward and took my dick in your mouth.

The heat of you hit me like a wall. Your lips sealed around the head, tongue sweeping underneath, and I had to lock my knees to keep from thrusting. You pulled back, letting me slip out of your mouth with a wet sound that echoed in the quiet garage.

"Don't come yet," you said, looking up at me.

"I'm trying."

"Try harder." Then you took me again, deeper this time, and I felt the back of your throat and the tight swallow of your muscles around me. My hands came up to your head instinctively, and you pulled off immediately.

"Hands behind your back."

"Cheryl—"

"Hands. Behind. Your back."

I did it, lacing my fingers together behind me, and the position forced my chest forward and my hips toward you. You nodded once, satisfied, and went back to work. Your mouth was slow and precise, taking me in inch by inch, tongue working the shaft with a pressure that made my vision blur. You'd pull back to the tip, swirl your tongue around the head, then sink down again, and the rhythm was maddening because it was exactly the pace you wanted, not the pace I needed.

I glanced at Barb. She was leaning forward in her chair, lips parted, one hand gripping the seat and the other resting on her thigh. Her eyes were locked on us—on your mouth moving over me, on the way your jaw worked, on the saliva connecting us. She was breathing hard. I could see her chest rising and falling from across the garage.

You pulled off me again and leaned back on the bench, supporting yourself on her palms. "On your knees," you told me.

I sank down, the concrete rough against my knees, and I was level with your hips now, looking at you. You spread your legs wider.

"You know what to do."

I did. I leaned forward and ran my tongue along the inside of your thigh, tasting salt and heat, working my way toward the center. When I reached your pussy, you were already wet—genuinely wet, not performance wet—and the taste of you hit my senses like a drug. I pressed my mouth against you and licked a long, slow stripe upward, and your breath caught in a way that told me I'd hit the right spot.

"There," you said. "Right there. Don't stop."

I didn't. I worked my tongue against your clit in steady circles, using the flat of it the way you'd taught me, keeping the pressure consistent. Your hand came to the back of my head, not pushing, just holding, fingers tightening in my hair when I found a rhythm that worked for you. Your hips rolled forward against my face, and I could feel your thighs tensing on either side of me.

"Use your fingers," you said, and I brought one hand from behind my back—breaking the rule, but you didn't correct me this time—and slid two fingers inside you. You were tight, the muscles of your pelvic floor gripping me immediately, and I curled them upward while I kept working your clit with my tongue.

"Fuck," you breathed, and hearing you curse was rare enough to make my cock jump. You were usually so controlled, so deliberate with your words. That single syllable told me you were losing the thread, even if just slightly.

I increased the pace, pumping my fingers in and out while I sucked gently on your clit, and your grip on my hair tightened to the point of pain. Your hips bucked against my face, and I felt your walls clamp down on my fingers, rhythmically, and I knew you were close.

"Stop," you said suddenly, and I pulled back, mouth wet, fingers still inside you. You were shaking slightly, thighs trembling against my shoulders. "Not yet. I want to come on your dick."

You pushed me back and stood up from the bench, then turned around and bent over it, bracing your hands on the padding. Your back was to me, the muscles of your spine and ass on full display, and you looked over your shoulder with those half-lidded eyes.

"Fuck me. Now."

I stood up, knees aching from the concrete, and stepped behind you. I lined myself up and pushed in slowly, and the sensation of entering you after all that buildup was almost overwhelming. You were hot and slick and tight, and I had to pause halfway to keep from losing it immediately.

"All the way," you commanded, and I pushed deeper until my hips were flush against your ass. I felt you adjust around me, your inner walls shifting to accommodate my size, and then you pushed back against me, telling me without words to start moving.

I did. I pulled back and thrust in, setting a rhythm that was steady and deep, and you met every thrust with your hips, the sound of our bodies connecting sharp and loud in the garage. The bench creaked under your hands. Your back muscles flexed with each movement, and I watched them ripple under your skin, mesmerized by the physical reality of you.

Barb had shifted in her chair again, and I caught movement in my peripheral vision—her hand was between her own legs now, pressing through her jeans. Her eyes were glassy, lips parted, watching us with an intensity that felt like another hand on my skin.

"Harder," you said, and I obeyed, gripping your hips and driving into you with more force. The pace increased, my thighs burning from the effort, sweat dripping from my chest onto your back. You dropped your head between your shoulders and let out a sound that was somewhere between a moan and a growl, and I felt your pussy tighten around me in waves.

"I'm close," I said through gritted teeth.

"Not yet." You reached back and grabbed my wrist, pulling my hand from your hip to your clit. "Make me come first."

I pressed my fingers against you, slick with your own wetness, and rubbed in tight circles while I kept thrusting. It was awkward, the angle, but I found the rhythm, and within seconds your breathing changed—faster, sharper, ragged. Your thighs began to shake, and I felt the orgasm building inside you, the way your walls started to contract in earnest.

"Fuck, fuck, fuck—" you said, three times in quick succession, and then your whole body seized. Your back arched, your pussy clamped down on my dick so hard I saw stars, and you came with a sound that bounced off the garage walls and made Barb gasp out loud.

I held on by a thread, my own orgasm pressing against the base of my spine like a lit fuse, and when your spasms finally started to ease, I pulled out. You turned around, still catching your breath, and looked at my cock, hard and glistening with you.

"Finish on me," you said, and you dropped to your knees in front of me. "My chest."

I wrapped my hand around myself and stroked fast, the sensation overwhelming after holding back for so long. You looked up at me, mouth slightly open, waiting, and the sight of you on your knees in front of me—dominant, powerful you, kneeling—was what pushed me over the edge.

I came with a groan that tore out of my chest, the first stripe hitting your collarbone, the second across your chest, the third weaker but still landing on your breast. You watched me the whole time, eyes never leaving my face, and when I was done, shaking and breathless, you ran a finger through the mess on your skin and brought it to your lips.

"Good," you said softly.

I slumped against the wall, legs like jelly, trying to remember how to breathe. You stood up, completely unbothered by your nakedness or the evidence of my orgasm drying on your skin, and walked to the shelf where you kept your gym towels. You tossed one to me and used another to wipe yourself clean.

Barb was still in her chair, hand still between her legs, looking like she'd just witnessed a natural disaster up close. Her face was flushed from her hairline to her neck.

"You okay over there, Barb?" you asked, and your voice had that smug satisfaction that I simultaneously hated and found unbearably attractive.

"I think so," Barb managed. "That was..."

"A lot?" I offered.

"I was going to say educational."

You laughed, and it was the real laugh, not the controlled one you used to project authority. "Larry, you can put your shorts back on. I think Barb's seen enough of you for one day."

I grabbed my shorts from the floor and pulled them on, my hands still shaking slightly. You dressed too, unhurried, like we'd just finished a normal workout. Which, in a way, we had. Your version of normal, anyway.

"Same time next week," you said, but then your body was lowering, your knees meeting the concrete before Barb with a weight that felt ceremonial, like you were kneeling at an altar only you could see. Your hands moved up her thighs with a slow, claiming pressure, parting her legs with an authority that made her breath catch in a ragged hitch, and then you were pulling her shorts down in one long, deliberate motion, the fabric dragging against her skin until it was gone, and she was bare, and the sound she made was half surprise, half desperate anticipation. When your mouth descended on her, it wasn't soft or questioning—it was a seizure, a direct and ferocious taking, your tongue spearing into her with immediate, devastating intent, and Barb's cry came out shattered, a sound ripped from somewhere I'd never accessed in all our years together. You consumed her with that same brutal, exquisite focus I knew too well, your jaw working in deep, grinding rhythms, your lips sealing and releasing, and I watched her unravel in real time: her spine bowing off the chair, her fingers twisting into your hair so hard I saw your scalp pull tight, her heels locking against the chair arms as she bucked against your face in violent, uncontrollable surges, wailing like the pleasure was being excavated from her bones, while you pinned her thighs open and drank down every last convulsion.

You looked at me, one eyebrow raised, that smirk playing at the corner of your mouth. "What do you think, Larry? Should we make this a regular thing?"

I thought about my heart hammering under your palm, your mouth on me, the way you'd said "fuck" three times like a prayer, Barb's wide eyes, the concrete under my knees, and the way you'd knelt at the end like even you needed to surrender sometimes.

"I think Barb might need a sturdier chair," I said.

You grinned. Barb turned pinker than she'd been all afternoon. And I knew, with a certainty that was equal parts thrilling and terrifying, that next week couldn't come fast enough.