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Under Her Sweat and Command

by overwhelmed

The afternoon sun blasted through the garage windows, turning the space into a sweatbox. Perfect. I dropped the barbell after my last set of deadlifts, the iron plates clanging against the rubber mats

about 5 hours ago
long readintense intensity
The afternoon sun blasted through the garage windows, turning the space into a sweatbox. Perfect. I dropped the barbell after my last set of deadlifts, the iron plates clanging against the rubber mats with a satisfying, heavy thud. My muscles sang with that deep, worked-over burn, and a sheen of sweat slicked my entire body. I was wearing just a sports bra and tiny spandex shorts, and I knew exactly what I looked like. I felt like a fucking predator.

Larry was on the weight bench, pretending to focus on his dumbbell presses. But I saw his eyes. That hungry, half-lidded gaze tracking me in the wall of mirrors. He was shirtless, his own athletic body glistening, but there was a tension in his shoulders that had nothing to do with the workout. Good.

Barb was perched on an old wooden stool by the tool bench, a sweating bottle of water forgotten in her hand. I’d invited her over to “watch us train.” She knew what that really meant. After the last time, when I’d let her sit in the corner of our bedroom while I rode Larry into the mattress, she’d been practically vibrating with nervous anticipation all week. Her cheeks were already flushed, and we hadn’t even started the real workout.

I grabbed a towel and slowly wiped down my arms, my chest, making sure to arch my back just a little.

“You’re staring, Larry,” I said, my voice cutting through the heavy, chalk-scented air.

He racked the dumbbells with a clang and sat up, not even trying to hide it anymore. “Can you blame me?”

“No,” I said, tossing the towel aside. “But I think you’re done with the iron. Your workout’s about to change.”

I walked over to him, my sneakers silent on the black rubber floor. I could feel Barb’s eyes on my ass, on the powerful muscles in my back. I stopped right in front of Larry, looking down at him. He was tall, but seated, I towered over him. I placed my hands on my hips.

“Stand up.”

He did. The heat coming off his body was intense. I reached out and traced a finger down the center of his chest, through the thin line of hair, stopping just at the waistband of his gym shorts. His breath hitched.

“Barb’s here,” he murmured, a flicker of that old hesitation in his eyes. He’d never been entirely comfortable with an audience, which was precisely why I loved making him perform.

“I know she is,” I said, loud enough for Barb to hear. I saw her stiffen on her stool out of the corner of my eye. “She’s going to watch. She’s going to see what a good, obedient husband looks like.”

I hooked my fingers into his shorts and yanked them down along with his boxer briefs in one swift motion. His cock, already half-hard, sprang free. It was a beautiful, thick thing, and I loved the way it twitched under my gaze. I didn’t touch it. Not yet.

“On your knees,” I commanded, my voice dropping to a low, dominant purr.

Larry’s eyes widened for a split second, a flash of surprise mixed with pure, unadulterated lust. He’d told me once, after our last wrestling match in this very garage, that my strength and dominance shocked and turned him on in equal measure. I was about to turn the dial all the way up. He sank to his knees on the mat, his cock now standing at full attention, pointing right at me.

I turned my back to him, giving Barb a clear, unobstructed view. I hooked my thumbs into my spandex shorts and peeled them down my legs, bending at the waist, slow and deliberate. I heard a sharp intake of breath from the stool. That was for her. I stepped out of the shorts and kicked them away. I was naked now, except for the sports bra, my ass bare inches from Larry’s face.

I looked over my shoulder at him. “You’re going to worship it.”

He leaned forward, his hands coming up to grip my hips, but I swatted them away.

“No hands. Just your tongue. And you’re not going for my pussy. Not yet.” I watched his expression, the confusion warring with the raw need. “I want you to lick my ass, Larry. Right here, with Barb watching.”

The words hung in the thick, hot air of the garage. A direct, filthy command. Larry’s face went through a rapid series of emotions—shock, a flicker of defiance, and then a complete, overwhelming surrender. His eyes, dark and wide, looked up at me with a reverence that made my own cunt clench.

“Cheryl…” he breathed, not a protest, but a prayer.

“Do it,” I said, and I spread my feet a little wider, bracing my hands on my own thighs. I pushed my ass back towards him, presenting myself. “Show her how a real man pleases his wife.”

He resisted. I felt his hands come up, not to touch me, but to push against the floor, trying to lever himself back, to create space. A guttural sound, half-formed words of refusal, died in his throat. He didn't want Barb to see this. Too bad.

I clamped my thighs. Hard. The muscles of my legs, strong from years of running, locked around his ribs and squeezed. He grunted, the air leaving him in a rush, his struggle turning to a desperate squirm. I didn't let up. I tightened my grip, using my weight to pin him, my ass pressing back against his face. He was going nowhere.

"Larry," I said, my voice low and cold, brooking no argument. "I didn't ask. I told you. Now, lick my ass."

“Fuuuck,” I whispered, my head dropping forward. The sensation was utterly obscene and wildly intimate. The wet, soft muscle tracing a path where no one else had ever dared to go.

“Look at her, Barb,” I grunted, my voice strained. “Look at how he serves me.”

I could see Barb in the mirror’s reflection. Her water bottle was now on the floor, and her hand was pressed flat against her own sternum, her eyes wide as dinner plates. She was breathing through her mouth, completely transfixed. The sight of her watching, of her witnessing my absolute control, was an aphrodisiac all its own.

Larry found his rhythm, his tongue lapping and swirling, painting my ass with his spit. He was moaning now, a low, desperate hum vibrating against my skin. He was getting off on this just as much as I was. I reached back with one hand and grabbed a fistful of his hair, holding him in place.

“Don’t you dare stop,” I growled. “Get it nice and wet. I want to feel your tongue inside me.”

He groaned, a sound of pure, masculine submission, and I felt the tip of his tongue stiffen and probe, pushing past the tight ring of muscle. The sensation was a shocking, filthy invasion that made my knees nearly buckle. I cried out, a guttural sound that echoed off the garage walls. It was a feeling of being utterly claimed, even as I was the one in command. The dominance was a feedback loop—the more he submitted to this act, the more powerful I felt, and the wetter I got.

I could feel my own arousal, a slick, hot trickle starting to run down my inner thigh. My clit was a throbbing, neglected pulse point, begging for attention. But this wasn’t about my pussy yet. This was about the act, the power, the performance. I ground my ass back against his face, fucking myself on his tongue, using him as my own personal toy while our friend watched from three feet away.

“Good boy,” I panted, my grip in his hair tightening. “Such a good, dirty boy for me.”

The central scene stretched on, a symphony of wet sounds and heavy breathing. The garage, usually smelling of iron and effort, now smelled of sex and sweat. I let him worship me for what felt like an eternity, his tongue a tireless, devoted servant. I’d pull his head back by the hair, make him gasp for air, then push his face right back into my ass, directing him with sharp, wordless commands. Barb had a hand over her mouth now, her thighs pressed tightly together on the stool, her whole body rigid with vicarious tension.

Finally, when my legs were trembling and I knew I couldn’t take another second without coming, I pulled him away.

“Enough,” I said, my voice hoarse.

Larry sat back on his heels, his face slick with sweat and saliva, his eyes glazed, his cock an angry, leaking purple. He looked completely and utterly wrecked. Beautiful.

I turned around and finally, finally pulled my sports bra over my head. My breasts, full and flushed, bounced free. I lowered myself onto the mat, lying back and pulling my knees up and apart, opening myself completely to the room. My pussy was an obscene, glistening mess.

“Now,” I said, looking from Larry’s desperate face to Barb’s stunned one. “You’re going to fuck me. And Barb,” I locked eyes with her in the mirror. “You’re not going to just sit there anymore. You’re going to touch yourself. Right now. Let me see.”

Barb’s mouth opened, but no sound came out. Her face was a brilliant crimson. But her hand, almost of its own accord, slid down her stomach and under the waistband of her yoga pants. She didn’t break eye contact with me.

Larry didn’t need to be told twice. He was on me in a heartbeat, his body covering mine, the heat of him a welcome weight. He notched the thick head of his cock at my entrance, and I reached down, guiding him. He slammed into me with one brutal, perfect stroke, filling me completely.

I yelled out, a sharp cry of pure satisfaction. “Yes! Fuck me, Larry. Fuck me hard and make her watch you come.”

He began to pound into me, a frantic, desperate rhythm. The sound of our bodies slapping together was a wet, percussive beat, a filthy soundtrack for the scene. I looked over at Barb. Her hand was moving furiously in her pants, her eyes locked on the place where Larry’s dick was pistoning in and out of me. Her mouth was slack, her breathing ragged. She was right on the edge, just from watching. I’d get her there. I’d get her all the way there.

I locked my legs around Larry’s waist, using my powerful core to meet every one of his thrusts. I could feel my orgasm building, a huge, crashing wave gathering force deep inside me. The feeling of being watched, of being in control, of Larry’s complete and total devotion, was the most potent combination I’d ever felt.

“I’m going to come,” I gasped, digging my nails into his back. “Come with me. Fill my pussy. Now!”

The command shattered him. With a final, guttural roar, Larry slammed into me to the hilt and held, his whole body going rigid as he pulsed his hot release deep inside me. The sensation of his climax triggered my own, and I flew apart, crying out his name as wave after wave of searing pleasure ripped through me, my cunt milking his cock for every last drop.

He collapsed on top of me, a heavy, panting, spent weight. I let him lie there for a moment, stroking his damp hair, my own breath slowly returning to normal. The world came back into focus. The smell of sex was overwhelming. The rubber mat was sticky beneath us.

And then I remembered Barb.

I gently pushed Larry off me and rolled to my feet. My legs were shaky, but my purpose was solid. Barb was frozen on her stool, her hand still in her pants, her face a mask of frustration and awe. She’d been seconds away, I could tell, but hadn’t let herself fall over the edge.

I walked over to her, my body still humming with post-orgasmic bliss. I could feel Larry’s come starting to leak down my thigh. I didn’t wipe it away.

“You didn’t finish,” I said, my voice soft but still carrying the edge of command.

She just shook her head, her eyes welling with a desperate, unshed need.

“Come here,” I whispered, and I pulled her to her feet. I wrapped one arm around her waist, pulling her close, and slid my other hand down the front of her pants, replacing her own. She gasped, her body melting against mine. She was sopping wet, her clit a hard, desperate little pearl. I circled it with my expert fingers, my touch firm and knowing.

“You were so good for me,” I murmured against her ear, my voice a low, intimate rumble. “Watching so quietly. You wanted to be me, didn’t you? To have that power.”

“Yes,” she choked out, a sob of pure lust.

“You don’t need to be me,” I said, increasing the pressure and speed of my fingers. “You just need to do what I say. Now, come for me, Barb. Right now.”

I pinched her clit, a sharp, perfect pressure, and she shattered. A high, keening wail escaped her lips as her body convulsed against mine, her climax wracking through her in violent, beautiful spasms. I held her tight, working her through it, until she went limp and sobbing with relief in my arms.

I eased her back onto the stool, a satisfied smirk playing on my lips. I looked over at Larry, who was propped up on his elbows on the mat, watching us with a dazed, utterly satisfied expression. He looked like a man who’d survived a beautiful, wonderful hurricane.

I grabbed my towel and tossed it to him.

“Clean up,” I said, my tone brisk and back to normal. “Then you’re making us all some protein shakes. Working up a sweat like that requires proper recovery.”

Larry caught the towel and let out a breathless laugh, shaking his head in disbelief. “Yes, ma’am.”

Barb was still catching her breath, a shy, stunned smile spreading across her face. She looked at me with a kind of hero worship that was more intoxicating than any pre-workout.

I winked at her. “Same time next week. We’ll work on your core.”