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The MSS Fulfillment sat low in the water, its hull painted matte black with a single gold line running the length of the ship like a vein. It was moored bow-to-stern alongside the MSS Temptation, and the two ships formed a wall against the MI Warehouse Events Center, blocking out the Manhattan skyline except for the slice of light that cut between their funnels. The water between the hull and the warehouse dock was black and still, reflecting nothing, and the only movement came from the twelve Kappa sorority girls who were carrying cases of champagne up the gangplank in their underwear.

They were wearing matching black bras and shorts with the Kappa crest embroidered in gold thread, and they moved with the efficiency of a flight crew who'd done this before. Each one carried two bottles. None of them looked cold, even though the air coming off the Hudson was the kind of air that found every inch of exposed skin and made a point about it. They'd been briefed. They'd been trained. They were managing the last details before departure, and the last details were: champagne, lube, towels, and twelve Nova devices charged and paired and laid out in their case on the main deck bar like surgical instruments.

Inside the ship, the poker room had been cleaned. The felt had been replaced. The carpet where Topanga had squirted was dry, and the faint smell of industrial cleaner mixed with the lingering ghost of sex and whiskey. The table was set for twelve. The cards were in their case. Yara's surcharge had been paid by Farkle, who'd entered it into his personal ledger under "Educational Expenses — Maritime Division" and who was now sitting at the bar with a glass of something amber, watching the sorority girls carry champagne past him with the expression of a man who had seen everything and was now just keeping score.

Aubrey was on the main deck, leaning against the railing, looking at the MSS Temptation. She was wearing jeans and a white t-shirt and no bra, and her nipples were pressing against the fabric in a way that was either the cold or the memory of what her fingers had been doing inside Topanga two days ago. Probably both. She had a whiskey in her hand — not the first one — and her green eyes were tracking the movement on the Temptation's deck, where crew members were doing final checks.

"You're staring," Maya said from behind her. "I'm assessing," Aubrey said. "There's a difference."
Maya came up beside her. She was wearing a hoodie that belonged to Riley and a pair of leggings that had been pulled on so fast they were inside out at the ankle. Her hair was a mess. She smelled like Riley's shampoo and lube and the particular ozone scent that comes from a Nova running at six for an extended period. She had a duffel bag over one shoulder. "What's in the bag?" Aubrey asked. "Revenge," Maya said. Aubrey looked at her. Maya looked back. Neither of them blinked for about four seconds, and then Aubrey took a sip of her whiskey and turned back to the railing. "Fair," she said.

Down below, in the corridor that connected the poker room to the main cabin, Riley was setting up. She'd commandeered one of the sorority girls — a brunette named Hailey who was pre-med and who had steady hands and no questions — and together they'd arranged six gel-filled patches on a silver tray. The patches were translucent, about the size of a quarter, and each one contained a compound that Farkle had developed in his lab: a topical neuro-modulator that, when applied to the skin behind the ear, created a specific kind of interference with the nerve signals traveling between the body's erogenous zones and the brain. It didn't block pleasure. It froze it. It took whatever climax was building — whatever wave was forming — and held it at its peak, suspended, unable to crest and unable to recede. The person it was applied to would be stuck at the exact moment before orgasm, feeling every bit of it, unable to finish, until the patch was removed.

Riley had asked Farkle for it after the poker game. She'd asked him in the bar, while Topanga was still on the floor and Maya was still standing with her Nova at six and the room still smelled like sex. She'd walked up to him, still naked from the waist down, lube still on her fingers, and said, "I need something that stops someone from coming."

Farkle had looked at her over his glass. "That's the opposite of what most people ask me for." "I know." "Who's it for?" "Jennifer." Farkle had nodded. He hadn't asked why. He'd gone to his lab on deck two and come back with the patches in a sealed container, and he'd handed them to Riley and said, "Thirty seconds to activate after placement. Removal is immediate — just peel. Don't use more than two per person per night."

Now Riley was laying them out on the tray, and Hailey was arranging them in a neat row, and Riley was thinking about Jennifer. Jennifer was in the main cabin. She was on one of the loungers — a long, curved piece of furniture that was technically a sofa but functioned as a sex surface, based on its shape and the built-in restraints tucked into its sides. She was wearing a silk slip that was the color of a bruise — deep purple, almost black — and she was on her back with one knee bent and her foot on the floor and her eyes closed. She wasn't asleep. She was the kind of woman who looked asleep when she was actually calculating seventeen things at once.

Stuart was across the room, talking to Smackle. Smackle was fully dressed — she was always fully dressed, in her lab coat and glasses, clipboard in hand, monitoring the pre-departure checklist with the intensity of someone defusing a bomb. Stuart was standing close to her, too close, his hand on the small of her back, and Smackle was ignoring him with the practiced efficiency of a woman who had been ignoring Stuart and had refined the technique to an art form.

Topanga came in from the poker room. She was wearing a robe — one of the ship's robes, white, plush, the kind that hotels put in suites to make you feel like you deserved it. She'd showered. Her hair was damp. She looked like a woman who had been fucked unconscious on a poker table forty minutes ago and had come back from it with the composure of someone who'd just had a refreshing nap. Only her eyes gave it away — they were slightly unfocused, still carrying the residue of what the Nova at seven had done to her nervous system.

She looked at Jennifer on the lounger. She looked at Riley with the tray. She looked at the patches.
"That's Farkle's compound," Topanga said. Not a question. Riley nodded. "Who's the target?"
"Jennifer." Topanga considered this. She let the robe fall open slightly — not on purpose, or maybe on purpose, because Topanga's relationship with clothing had shifted permanently somewhere between the first confession and the seventh — and she reached for the bottle of whiskey that was sitting on the side table. She poured two fingers into a glass and drank it in one pull.

"Make sure you get the patch right behind the mastoid," Topanga said. "If it's too low, it just makes the ear numb. If it's too high, it does nothing. Farkle's notes say the sweet spot is the indentation behind the earlobe, about two centimeters posterior." Riley stared at her mother. "You read Farkle's notes?" "I read everything," Topanga said. She poured another whiskey. "It's a liability issue. This is my ship."

She drank the second whiskey. Then she looked at Aubrey, who had just come in from the deck with Maya, and she picked up the bottle and walked over to her. "Drink," Topanga said. "I'm already drinking," Aubrey said, lifting her glass. "Drink more," Topanga said. She tipped the bottle and poured whiskey directly into Aubrey's mouth, no glass, just the bottle, and Aubrey's eyes went wide and she swallowed and some of it ran down her chin and onto her white t-shirt, making the fabric transparent over her left breast, and Topanga watched it happen with the expression of a woman who had done exactly what she intended to do.

"Everyone's nerves need resetting," Topanga said. "We've got six days at sea. We're not starting at eleven." "We're literally already at eleven," Maya said from the doorway. She'd set the duffel bag on the floor. It was open. Inside it, visible to anyone who looked, was a wooden paddle — dark wood, smooth, about fourteen inches long with a flat oval head and a leather-wrapped handle. It was the kind of paddle that looked like it belonged in a study and functioned like it belonged in a bedroom.

"That's payback," Maya said. She wasn't looking at Aubrey. She was looking at Topanga. Topanga looked at the paddle. She looked at Maya. Her expression didn't change, but something shifted behind her eyes — a flicker, a recognition, the particular alertness of a woman who had been bent over a poker table and vibrated to orgasm by a stranger and was now being told that her daughter -in-law wanted to spank her for it.

"For what?" Topanga asked. "For letting Aubrey put you at seven without a ramp-up," Maya said. "That was my wife's mother on that floor. er squirting on the carpet. You didn't negotiate. You didn't safeword. You just let a woman you met three hours ago detonate you in front of twelve people." "I didn't hear you object," Topanga said. "I was at six," Maya said. "I couldn't form sentences."

Topanga almost smiled. Almost. The corner of her mouth moved about two millimeters and then stopped, because Topanga's smiles were controlled the same way everything else about her was controlled — doled out in precise increments, never wasted, never accidental. "Riley," Maya said. "Is the patch ready?" "The Patch is ready," Riley said. "Then we do Jennifer first," Maya said. "Then I deal with Topanga."

Jennifer opened one eye. She'd heard all of it. She'd been hearing all of it since Topanga walked in, since Riley set up the tray, since Maya mentioned the paddle. She'd been lying on that lounger with her eyes closed and her silk slip riding up her thigh and she'd been listening, and now she opened one eye and looked at the room and the four women in it and the paddle in the duffel bag and the patches on the tray. "No," Jennifer said. "Yes," Riley said. "I didn't agree to anything."

"You told Maya her edging was 'cute,'" Riley said. "You said Stuart's dream was 'amateur.' You sat at that table fully clothed and judged every single person who confessed, and then you left before anything happened to you." Jennifer's other eye opened. "I have standards." "You have a mouth," Riley said. "And it's been running all night. So here's what's going to happen." She picked up one of the gel patches from the tray. She held it between her thumb and forefinger, the same way Aubrey had held the Nova earlier — delicate, precise, like she was holding a bullet. "I'm going to walk over there. I'm going to sit next to you. And I'm going to put this behind your ear."

"What does it do?" Jennifer asked. Her voice was steady. Her eyes were not. "It freezes you," Riley said. "Wherever you are. However close you are. You stay there." Jennifer looked at the patch. She looked at Riley. She looked at Topanga, who was drinking whiskey and watching with the detached interest of a spectator at a tennis match. She looked at Maya, who was standing with the paddle in one hand and her other hand on her hip. She looked at Aubrey, whose whiskey-soaked t-shirt was clinging to her breast and who was leaning against the doorframe with the posture of someone who had been through it already and was now just here for the show.

"Who's getting me close?" Jennifer asked. "I am," Aubrey said. She pushed off the doorframe. She walked to the lounger. She knelt on the edge of it, one knee between Jennifer's legs, and she put her whiskey-down hand on Jennifer's knee and pushed it open. The silk slip rode up. Jennifer's thighs were bare. She wasn't wearing underwear — because nobody on this ship was wearing underwear, because underwear had become a conceptual artifact somewhere around the second hand of strip poker.

Aubrey's hand slid up Jennifer's thigh. Her fingers were still slick with whiskey, and the trail they left was cold and warm at the same time, and Jennifer's leg muscles tightened under the touch. "You're going to get me close," Jennifer said. It wasn't a question this time. It was a confirmation, or a challenge, or both. "I'm going to get you close," Aubrey said. "And then Riley's going to patch you. And you're going to stay there." "For how long?" "However long Maya wants," Aubrey said.

Maya leaned the paddle against the wall. She walked to the lounger and sat on the arm of it, near Jennifer's head. She looked down at Jennifer's face — the sharp cheekbones, the dark eyes, the mouth that had been delivering verdicts all night — and she brushed Jennifer's hair back from her ear. The mastoid process was right there, the small bony bump behind the earlobe, and the indentation posterior to it was exactly where Topanga had said it would be.

"Whenever you're ready," Maya said to Aubrey. Aubrey's fingers reached the top of Jennifer's thigh. She paused there, her thumb resting in the crease where leg meets hip, and she looked down at Jennifer's face. Jennifer was watching her. The silk slip had bunched at Jennifer's waist, and from this angle — Aubrey kneeling between her legs, Maya sitting at her head, Riley standing with the patch — Jennifer was exposed and visible and the cool air of the cabin was touching her in places that hadn't been touched by anyone in hours.

Aubrey's thumb moved. It traced the crease inward, slow, and then her fingers found Jennifer's pussy. She was wet. Not as wet as Topanga had been — Jennifer hadn't been bent over a table for an hour — but wet enough that Aubrey's fingers slid without resistance, and the sound they made was the sound of fingers in a wet pussy, which is a sound that everyone in that room recognized because they'd all been hearing it or making it all night.

Jennifer's breath changed. That was the first sign. The controlled, measured breathing that she'd been doing on the lounger — the breathing of a woman who was performing calm — shifted. It got shorter. It got shallower. Her abdominal muscles contracted under the silk. Aubrey found her clit. She pressed with two fingers, one on each side, and she rubbed in a motion that was different from how she'd touched Topanga — slower, more lateral, less direct. She was reading Jennifer the way she'd read Topanga, but Jennifer's body spoke a different language. Jennifer responded to pressure on the sides, not the top. Jennifer responded to slow. Jennifer responded to the approach more than the arrival.

"Fuck," Jennifer said. It came out quiet. Almost private. Like she hadn't meant to say it. Aubrey kept going. Her fingers moved in that lateral rhythm, and her other hand came up and pushed the silk slip higher, exposing Jennifer's stomach, her ribs, the way her chest was starting to rise and fall faster. Aubrey's fingers dipped lower, gathered wetness, and came back to her clit, and the added slickness changed the friction and Jennifer's hips moved — a single, involuntary roll that she couldn't stop and didn't try to.

Maya was watching Jennifer's face. The dark eyes were half-closed now. The mouth was open. The cheekbones were flushed. Jennifer was getting close, and the signs were the same signs they always were — the breathing, the flush, the hip movement, the way the abdominal muscles started to fire in rhythm with the stimulation — and Maya was counting. "Now," Maya said.

Riley stepped forward. She peeled the patch from the tray. Her fingers were steady — pre-med Hailey had been good training, or the pre-med sorority girl had given her confidence, or Riley was just the kind of person who was steady when it mattered. She placed the patch behind Jennifer's left ear, pressing it firmly into the indentation posterior to the mastoid process, exactly where Topanga had specified.

The patch activated in thirty seconds. During those thirty seconds, Aubrey didn't stop. Her fingers kept moving, kept that lateral pressure, kept building. Jennifer's moan started low — in her chest, in her throat — and rose. It rose through the thirty seconds, gaining volume and texture, and by the time the patch activated, Jennifer was moaning in a way that echoed off the cabin walls and carried into the corridor. Then the patch caught.

Jennifer's body locked. Her hips froze mid-roll. Her fingers, which had been gripping the lounger's edge, went rigid. Her moan didn't stop — it continued, but it became a single sustained note, unchanging, a sound that was stuck the same way her orgasm was stuck. She was at the peak. She was at the exact crest of the wave, and the wave wasn't breaking. It was just there, holding her up, holding her open, holding her at the threshold of something she couldn't cross.

"Oh —" Jennifer said. The word came out strangled. "Oh, God, I'm — I'm right there, I'm —" She couldn't finish. Not the sentence. Not the orgasm. "Right there?" Riley said. She was looking at Jennifer's face, at the expression that was frozen between agony and ecstasy. "Yeah. You are. Stay there." Jennifer's moan came again — louder, rawer, and it echoed into the hallway, and two of the sorority girls who were carrying champagne past the cabin door stopped and looked at each other and kept walking.

Topanga laughed. It was a real laugh — full, warm, the kind of laugh that she almost never let out in public, the kind that came from the same place as the sound she'd made when the Nova hit seven. She laughed and she poured another whiskey and she drank it and she looked at Jennifer's frozen, writhing, stuck body on the lounger, and she said, "That's what judgment feels like from the other side."

Aubrey pulled her fingers out. She wiped them on her jeans. She stood up and walked to the bar where Farkle was sitting and she picked up his glass and drank from it and set it down and said, "She's going to be like that for a while." "How long?" Farkle asked. "However long Maya wants," Aubrey said again.

Maya was still sitting on the arm of the lounger. She was looking at Jennifer. Jennifer was looking at the ceiling. Her body was trembling — small, continuous tremors, the kind that come from a muscle being held in contraction too long. Her pussy was swollen and wet and untouched now, and the orgasm that had been building was still there, still present, still pressing against the inside of her body with nowhere to go.

"How does it feel?" Maya asked. Jennifer's jaw was clenched. Her voice came through her teeth. "Like I'm about to come. Like I'm about to come. Like I'm about to come. Like nothing is happening. Like I'm about to come." "That's the point," Maya said. She stood up. She walked to the wall where the paddle was leaning. She picked it up. She turned to Topanga.

Topanga was standing by the bar. She'd finished her whiskey. Her robe was open. She was watching Maya with the paddle the way a lawyer watches opposing counsel approach the bench — with respect for the move and readiness for the counter. "Your turn," Maya said. "For the paddle?" "For the paddle." Topanga looked at the paddle. She looked at Maya. She looked at Riley, who was standing by the lounger with the patch tray and a grin that was making her face hurt. She looked at Aubrey, who was drinking Farkle's whiskey. She looked at Jennifer, who was moaning on the lounger in a continuous, sustained, unbreaking note that was filling the cabin like a siren.

"Same rules as the Nova," Topanga said. "No warmup." "That's not how this works," Maya said. "This is payback. I decide how it works." She walked toward Topanga. The paddle was in her right hand. Her left hand reached out and took the robe's belt and pulled it. The robe fell open. Topanga was naked underneath it — the same body that had been bent over the poker table, the same abs, the same breasts, the same legs — and Maya looked at her and felt the same thing she'd felt all night, which was a combination of awe and desire and the particular protective fury that comes from watching someone you love do something reckless with their body.

"Bend over the bar," Maya said. Topanga looked at the bar. It was a proper bar — polished wood, curved, the kind of bar that could hold a person's weight. Farkle was sitting at it. He looked at Topanga. He looked at Maya. He picked up his glass and moved to the far end without a word.
Topanga walked to the bar. She dropped the robe. She bent over it, and the position was the same as the poker table — hands flat, back arched, ass presented — but the context was different. This wasn't Aubrey, clinical and new. This was pure revenge.