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Evening's Unwrapped Promises

by Mark Allen
about 1 hour ago
•long read•intense intensity
The bell above the door chimed as Susan and I stepped into the cool evening air, the scent of the city still clinging to our clothes from the restaurant down the block. Julie’s voice had been warm over the phone, almost breathless with excitement, and now the anticipation hummed between us as we made our way to her apartment. Susan’s fingers brushed against mine, her touch light but deliberate.

“You think she’s nervous?” Susan asked, her silver hair catching the glow of the streetlights.

I chuckled. “If she is, she’s hiding it well. That girl’s got a way of making everything feel easy.”

Susan smirked. “Or maybe she just knows what she wants.”

The walk was short, but every step felt charged, like the air itself was thick with the promise of what was to come. Julie’s building was old, the kind with creaky floors and thin walls, but her apartment was a different world—clean, cozy, the scent of something savory and buttery drifting from the kitchen. She greeted us at the door with a smile that was all teeth and mischief, her long blonde waves spilling over her shoulders. She was dressed in a snug black dress that hugged her curves, the swell of her double Ds impossible to ignore.

“You came,” she said, stepping back to let us in. “I was starting to think you’d changed your minds.”

I shut the door behind us. “And miss out on whatever you’ve been cooking up in here? Not a chance.”

Her laugh was soft, almost a purr. “Good. I’ve been looking forward to this.”

The apartment was immaculate—every surface polished, every cushion plumped. The appetizers were laid out on the coffee table: bruschetta glistening with olive oil, stuffed mushrooms, a charcuterie board that looked like it belonged in a magazine. But it wasn’t the food that had my attention. It was the way Julie’s eyes flicked between us, the way her fingers lingered on the stem of her wine glass as she poured us each a drink.

“You went all out,” Susan said, picking up a piece of bruschetta and taking a slow, deliberate bite. Her lips curled around it, her gaze locked on Julie. “Impressed.”

Julie’s cheeks flushed, but she didn’t look away. “I wanted tonight to be… special.”

I took a sip of my wine, the dry red sliding down my throat. “Special how?”

She set her glass down and stepped closer, her hips swaying just enough to draw my eyes. “I’ve missed you two. Missed the way you made me feel.” Her fingers trailed up my arm, her touch sending a jolt through me. “Missed *this*.”

Susan’s breath hitched. I could see the hunger in her eyes, the way she was already imagining how this would play out. Julie’s hand slid to my chest, her palm flat against the soft fabric of my shirt. “You’re so good at making love, Mark. I’ve thought about it—about *you*—a lot.”

My cock twitched in my pants. Fuck. She wasn’t wasting any time.

Susan set her wine down and closed the distance between her and Julie, her own hand cupping Julie’s cheek. “And what about me, sweetheart? You miss me too?”

Julie leaned into the touch, her lips parting slightly. “God, yes. The way you watch… the way you *touch*…” She turned her head just enough to press a kiss to Susan’s palm. “I want both of you. Tonight. No holding back.”

The tension in the room was a living thing, coiled tight and ready to snap. Susan’s other hand found Julie’s waist, pulling her flush against her body. “You sure about that, Julie? Once we start, we’re not stopping until you’re begging us to.”

Julie’s breath came faster. “Please. I *need* this.”

That was all the encouragement I needed. I set my glass down and stepped in behind Julie, my hands finding her hips. She was warm, her body soft under my palms. I leaned down, my lips brushing the shell of her ear. “Then let’s not waste any more time.”

Julie let out a little moan as Susan’s mouth crashed into hers, their lips moving together in a slow, deep kiss. I watched for a moment, my cock growing harder as Susan’s hands roamed Julie’s body, squeezing her tits through the thin fabric of her dress. Then I couldn’t wait anymore. My hands slid up Julie’s thighs, bunching the hem of her dress until I could slip my fingers underneath, finding the hot, bare skin of her ass.

“Fuck,” Julie gasped, breaking the kiss. “Just like that.”

Susan grinned, her fingers working at the buttons of Julie’s dress. “We’re just getting started.”

The dress pooled at Julie’s feet, leaving her in nothing but a black lace bra and a pair of matching panties that did little to hide how wet she already was. My hands went straight to her tits, kneading the soft flesh, my thumbs brushing over her plump nipples through the lace. Julie arched into the touch, her head falling back against my shoulder.

“Mark,” she breathed. “I’ve dreamed about your hands on me again.”

Susan dropped to her knees in front of Julie, her hands sliding up the inside of her thighs. “And I’ve dreamed about tasting you.” Without another word, she hooked her fingers into the waistband of Julie’s panties and pulled them down, the scent of Julie’s arousal thick in the air.

Julie spread her legs wider, her fingers tangling in Susan’s hair as Susan’s tongue dragged through her folds. Julie’s moans filled the room, her hips rocking against Susan’s mouth. I couldn’t resist anymore. My cock was aching, straining against my pants. I unbuckled my belt and let my slacks drop to the floor, my boxers following. My dick sprang free, already hard and leaking at the tip.

Julie’s eyes flicked down, her lips parting as she took in the sight of me. “God, you’re so *big*.”

Susan pulled back just long enough to smirk up at me. “He’s all yours, sweetheart. For now.”

Julie didn’t need to be told twice. She turned in my arms, pressing her ass back against me, her pussy already dripping wet. I didn’t hesitate. I gripped her hips and lined myself up, pushing into her in one smooth thrust. Julie cried out, her nails digging into the arm of the couch as I bottomed out inside her.

“Fuck, Mark,” she panted. “Just like that. *Harder.*”

I pulled back and slammed into her again, my balls slapping against her thighs with a wet, obscene sound. Susan watched us with dark, hungry eyes, her own fingers working between her legs as she pleasured herself. Julie was tight, so fucking tight, her walls clenching around me with every thrust.

“You like that, don’t you?” I growled, my hips snapping forward. “You like being fucked like a good little slut while Susan watches?”

Julie whimpered. “Yes. *God, yes.*”

Susan’s free hand found Julie’s clit, her fingers circling the sensitive nub as I pounded into her from behind. Julie’s body trembled, her moans growing louder, more desperate. “I’m gonna—*oh fuck*—I’m gonna come!”

And she did, her pussy clamping down around me as her orgasm crashed over her. Her body shook, her cries filling the room as I kept fucking her through it, drawing out every last shudder. Susan didn’t stop either, her fingers working Julie’s clit as she came down from the high.

“Again,” Julie gasped. “I need to come *again*.”

I chuckled darkly. “You’re gonna come as many times as we want, Julie. And we’re not done with you yet.”

I pulled out, my cock glistening with her arousal, and Julie turned to face me, her eyes glazed with lust. She dropped to her knees in front of me, her hands wrapping around the base of my shaft. “Let me taste you,” she begged, her tongue flicking out to catch the bead of pre-cum at the tip.

Susan moved in beside her, her own tits bared now, her nipples hard and begging for attention. “Show me how you suck him, Julie. I want to learn.”

Julie didn’t need to be told twice. She took me deep into her mouth, her lips sealing around the base as her tongue swirled around the head. Susan watched, her own hand stroking my shaft as Julie pulled back, her lips glistening. “Like this,” Julie murmured, before taking me back into her mouth, her throat working as she deep-throated me.

Susan’s fingers joined Julie’s, both of them working my cock together, their mouths taking turns. The sight of them—Julie’s full lips wrapped around me, Susan’s silver hair spilling over my thighs as she licked and sucked—was almost too much. My hips bucked, my fingers tangling in Julie’s hair as she took me deeper, her throat fluttering around the head.

“I’m gonna come,” I groaned, my voice rough. “Fuck, I’m gonna come.”

Julie didn’t pull back. She hollowed her cheeks, her eyes locked on mine as she took every last drop, her throat working as she swallowed around me. Susan’s mouth was there too, catching the overflow, her tongue lapping at the tip as Julie pulled back, my cum dripping down her chin.

“Goddamn,” Susan breathed, her own fingers busy between her legs. “That was *hot*.”

Julie wiped her mouth with the back of her hand, her lips swollen and red. “I want more. I want *you* inside me, Mark. Fuck me *harder* this time.”

I was already hard again, my cock twitching at the sight of her. Susan stood, her own dress pooled at her feet now, her body completely bare. “Then let’s take this to the bedroom. I want to watch you two up close.”

Julie didn’t argue. She stood, her body trembling with need, and led the way to her bedroom. The space was just as immaculate as the rest of the apartment, the bed already turned down, the sheets smooth and inviting. I didn’t waste any time. I pushed Julie onto the bed, her body bouncing slightly as she landed on her back. Susan climbed up beside her, her hands already on Julie’s tits, pinching and rolling her nipples as Julie arched into the touch.

I crawled between Julie’s legs, my mouth finding her pussy, my tongue dragging through her folds. She was *soaked*, her arousal dripping down her thighs. Susan’s mouth found mine, her tongue sliding against mine as I lapped at Julie’s clit, the taste of her sweet and salty on my lips.

Julie’s hips bucked, her fingers tangling in my hair. “Mark, *please*. I need your cock. I need you to *fuck* me.”

I didn’t make her wait. I lined myself up and pushed into her, filling her in one deep stroke. Julie cried out, her back arching off the bed as I bottomed out inside her. Susan’s mouth was on mine again, her tongue demanding as I started to move, my hips snapping forward, my balls slapping against Julie’s ass with every thrust.

“Fuck, you feel *amazing*,” I groaned against Susan’s lips. “So tight. So *wet*.”

Julie’s legs wrapped around my waist, her heels digging into my back as she pulled me deeper. “Harder, Mark. *Fuck me harder.*”

I gave her what she wanted. My hands gripped her hips, lifting her slightly off the bed as I pounded into her, the sound of skin slapping against skin filling the room. Susan’s hands were everywhere—on my chest, my back, my ass—her nails digging in as she urged me on.

“Make her come again,” Susan commanded, her voice rough with desire. “Make her *scream*.”

Julie’s body was trembling, her pussy clenching around me as another orgasm built inside her. I could feel it, the way her walls fluttered, the way her breath hitched. I reached down, my thumb finding her clit, and rubbed in tight, fast circles.

“Come for me, Julie,” I growled. “Come on my *cock*.”

And she did, her body exploding around me, her scream filling the room as her pussy milked me, her walls pulsing as she rode out the waves of pleasure. I didn’t stop. I kept fucking her, kept thrusting into her as she came down, drawing out every last shudder.

“Again,” Susan demanded, her voice leaving no room for argument. “I want to see her come *again*.”

Julie was a mess beneath me, her body slick with sweat, her hair fanned out across the pillows. But she wasn’t done. Not even close. I flipped her onto her stomach, pulling her up onto her knees, her ass in the air. Susan moved in front of her, her fingers tangling in Julie’s hair as she pulled her up, their mouths crashing together in a hungry kiss.

I lined myself up and pushed into Julie from behind, my hands gripping her hips as I bottomed out inside her. The angle was deeper, *better*, and Julie moaned into Susan’s mouth as I started to move, my cock pistoning in and out of her.

“Oh *fuck*,” Julie gasped, breaking the kiss. “Just like that. *Yes.*”

Susan’s free hand slid down Julie’s body, her fingers finding her clit again. “Come for us, Julie. Come *now*.”

Julie’s body trembled, her pussy clenching around me as another orgasm ripped through her. Her cries were muffled against Susan’s mouth, her body shaking as I kept fucking her, kept driving into her as she came apart around me.

I could feel my own release building, the pressure coiling tight in my gut. Susan must have seen it in my face because she pulled Julie back against me, her own body pressing against Julie’s back as my cock slid in and out of her.

“Come inside her, Mark,” Susan whispered, her voice dark and demanding. “Fill her up. *Breed her.*”

The words sent me over the edge. With a groan, I buried myself deep inside Julie and came, my cock pulsing as I emptied myself into her, my cum filling her up as she whimpered and trembled beneath me. Susan’s hands were on both of us, her touch feather-light as she soothed us through the aftershocks.

Julie collapsed onto the bed, her body limp and satisfied. I pulled out slowly, my cock glistening with our combined arousal, cum dripping out of Julie’s well-fucked pussy. Susan didn’t waste a drop. She slid down the bed, her tongue dragging through Julie’s folds, lapping up every last bit of my cum as Julie let out a weak, satisfied moan.

“God,” Julie breathed, her voice hoarse. “That was… *incredible*.”

Susan crawled back up the bed, her lips shiny with Julie’s arousal and my cum. “And we’re not done yet.”

Julie’s eyes fluttered open, a slow, lazy smile spreading across her face. “Good. Because I *need* you again, Mark. Harder. *More.*”

I chuckled, my body already stirring despite the exhaustion. “You’re gonna be the death of me, Julie.”

Susan grinned, her hand sliding down to stroke my already half-hard cock. “But what a way to go.”

Julie let out a contented sigh, her body still trembling from the aftershocks of her orgasms. “I don’t think I can move.”

Susan’s laugh was warm, affectionate. “Then we’ll move for you.” She stood, her nude body glowing in the soft light of the bedroom lamp. “But first, let’s get you cleaned up. We can’t have you sticking to the sheets.”

Julie groaned as Susan pulled her up, her legs wobbling slightly. “I don’t wanna.”

“Tough,” Susan said, her voice leaving no room for argument. She led Julie to the bathroom, her arm wrapped around her waist to keep her steady. I watched them go, my cock twitching at the sight of their bare asses swaying as they walked away.

I collapsed back onto the bed, my body spent but my mind already racing with thoughts of round two. The sheets were a mess beneath me, the scent of sex thick in the air. I could hear the water running in the bathroom, the soft murmur of Susan and Julie’s voices as they talked, their laughter warm and easy.

A few minutes later, Susan came back into the bedroom, a towel wrapped around her body. “Julie’s gonna need a minute,” she said, crawling onto the bed beside me. “But I think we can keep ourselves busy.”

I pulled her against me, my mouth finding hers in a slow, deep kiss. “You’re insatiable.”

She smirked against my lips. “And you love it.”

I did. God, I did.

The water shut off in the bathroom, and a moment later, Julie stumbled back into the bedroom, another towel wrapped around her body. Her hair was damp, her skin still flushed from the heat of the shower. She looked exhausted, but her eyes were bright with hunger.

“Round two?” she asked, her voice hopeful.

Susan grinned. “After breakfast.”

Julie pouted, but there was no real disappointment in her eyes. “Fine. But I’m holding you to that.”

I chuckled, pulling Susan closer against me. “We wouldn’t have it any other way.”

And as the three of us settled into the bed, our bodies tangled together in a mess of limbs and satisfaction, I knew this wasn’t the end. Not even close. But for now, exhaustion pulled at us, our bodies heavy with the weight of pleasure. Susan’s fingers traced lazy patterns on my chest, Julie’s head resting on my shoulder, her breath warm against my skin.

“Best night ever,” Julie murmured, her voice sleepy.

Susan let out a soft laugh. “And it’s not over yet.”

I pressed a kiss to the top of Julie’s head, my other arm wrapped around Susan’s waist. “No, sweetheart. It’s *far* from over.”