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The school parking lot was nearly empty by the time I pulled in, three-fifteen on a Tuesday and the rain just starting to spit against my windshield. I cut the engine and checked my phone again. Nothi

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The school parking lot was nearly empty by the time I pulled in, three-fifteen on a Tuesday and the rain just starting to spit against my windshield. I cut the engine and checked my phone again. Nothing from my daughter, nothing from the school. The pickup line had already dissolved, kids bundled into SUVs and minivans, gone. I figured she'd gone home with a friend and forgotten to text me. It wouldn't be the first time.

I was about to back out when the passenger door swung open and someone dropped into the seat beside me.

Not my daughter.

Layla.

She was wearing a white crop top that was doing absolutely nothing it was supposed to do. The fabric was thin, stretched tight across her chest, and I could see the dark circles of her nipples through it. More than that — I could see wet spots. Two of them, spreading slowly, the fabric going translucent where it clung to her skin.

"Drive," she said, like she'd been waiting for me specifically.

"Layla, what are you—"

"Just drive. Please." She buckled her seatbelt across her lap, and it pressed between her tits, making the wet spots worse. She didn't seem to care. She was looking at my lap. Not my face. My lap.

I pulled out of the lot because honestly, what else was I going to do? She was eighteen, she wasn't a student at the school anymore — had graduated last year, I vaguely remembered — and the rain was picking up. I wasn't going to leave her standing in it.

"You're staring," I said.

"I know." She didn't look up. "I've been staring since the last time I was at your house. You were asleep on the couch. Your shorts had ridden up. I could see the head of it."

I shifted in my seat. She was right. I'd been half-aware that morning, felt the weight of my cock shifting against my thigh as I dozed off after Carol left for work. I hadn't known anyone was watching.

"Kylie was there too," Layla continued, her voice low and steady. "We came in through the back door and you were just lying there. One leg off the couch. Your dick was half-hard, just resting against your stomach, and the foreskin was pulled back just enough that I could see the tip. It was wet."

"You were in my house."

"Twice." She finally looked at me. Her eyes were wide, bright, genuinely excited. "The second time, Kylie pulled the blanket off you. You didn't wake up. She touched it. Just with her fingertips, right on the foreskin, and it moved. It throbbed. We both felt it."

My cock was getting hard. There was no point pretending it wasn't. The jeans I was wearing were loose, but the way it was growing, thick and heavy, it was starting to press against the denim. Layla watched it happen. Her lips parted.

"The first time we just watched," she said. "Kylie and me. We sat on the floor next to the couch and watched you sleep. Your dick kept moving. Not like you were dreaming, just... throbbing. Like it had its own heartbeat. And it was leaking. This little thread of precum that ran down the side and pooled on your stomach. Kylie wiped it up with her finger and put it in her mouth."

"You're telling me this in my car."

"I'm telling you this because I can see it happening again right now." She pointed at my lap. The head of my cock was visible now, straining against the fabric, the outline unmistakable. "It's throbbing. I can see it from here."

She was right. It never stopped. Even soft, the thing had a pulse. Hard, it was obscene — thick as a pop bottle, veined, the foreskin stretched tight around the shaft and still covering the head just enough to catch the steady leak of precum that had been my default state since I was a teenager.

"I think about it all the time," Layla said. She shifted in her seat, turned toward me, and the movement pressed her tits together. The wet spots on her shirt were bigger now. "Not just your dick. The cum. How much there is. Kylie told me about the time you were asleep on the kitchen floor — don't ask why you were asleep on the kitchen floor — and she pulled the foreskin back and just held it. She said you came without waking up. Just shot straight up onto her hand and she drank it."

"That was—" I started, but she cut me off.

"She said it was thick. That it stayed on her tongue. That she could feel the veins in your cock pulsing against her palm while you came." Layla's breathing had changed. Faster. "I want that. I've wanted that since the first time I saw it."

I pulled onto a side road. Dead end. Trees on both sides. Rain hammering the roof. I put the car in park.

"Layla."

"Peter."

"This is—"

"We're both adults. I'm telling you what I want. I've been telling Kylie for months that I want to suck your cock. She said I should just tell you. She said you wouldn't mind." She reached up and pulled her crop top over her head.

Her tits were full, heavy, the skin smooth and slightly flushed. Her nipples were pink and puffy, swollen outward, and they were leaking. Thin white streams of milk running down the curve of each breast, catching the gray light from the rain-streaked windows.

"I can't stop it," she said, looking down at herself. "It started last month. Kylie says it's because I think about your cock too much. She might be right."

I unbuckled my seatbelt.

"Come here," I said.

She climbed across the console, awkward in the small space, her tits pressing against my arm as she settled into my lap. She was warm, soft, her stomach round against mine, and when she ground down I felt her ass press against the length of my cock through my jeans. She gasped.

"Fuck. I can feel it."

"It's not even out yet."

"I know. That's what makes it crazy." She rocked her hips, slow, dragging herself along the shaft. "Kylie and I used to do this. Not with you — with each other. We'd talk about your dick while we rubbed against each other. She'd sit on my lap and we'd press our tits together and she'd whisper about what it would feel like inside her. Then we'd trade. I'd sit on her. Our nipples would touch and milk would come out of both of us and it would mix on our skin, all warm and slick, and we'd slide against each other until we came."

I reached up and cupped her tits. They were firm, heavy, overflowing my hands. I ran my thumbs over her nipples and more milk beaded up, ran down over my fingers.

"Tell me about Kylie," I said.

"She's got these tits," Layla said, closing her eyes. "Not as big as mine but rounder. Her nipples are darker, more brown than pink, and they're long. When I suck on them, they get even longer. Like little fingers in my mouth. And the milk — hers tastes sweeter than mine. Thinner. It comes out faster too. I'll be sucking on one and it'll just spray, hit the back of my throat, and I swallow it and she makes this sound. This little moan. And I know she's thinking about your cock."

I undid my jeans. The zipper was a fight — my cock was so hard it had stretched the fabric tight — but I got it down, and when I pulled myself free, Layla looked down and her whole body went still.

"Oh my God."

It lay against my stomach, thick and dark, the veins running along the shaft visibly pulsing. The foreskin was still covering the head, bunched at the tip, and a steady stream of precum was leaking through it, making the skin shine.

"It's bigger than Kylie said."

"It's always like this."

"No wonder it hurts people." She wrapped her hand around it. Her fingers didn't touch. "I can feel it. The throbbing. It's like holding a heartbeat." She squeezed gently and a thick rope of precum pushed out from under the foreskin, ran down over her knuckles. She brought her hand to her mouth and licked it clean.

"I've wanted this so fucking bad," she whispered. "Every night. I'd lie in bed and squeeze my thighs together and imagine you asleep on the couch and me just... helping myself. Pulling the skin back. Putting my mouth on it. Kylie said you taste like salt and skin and something sweet underneath. She was right."

She slid down my body, pressing her tits against my cock as she went. The head dragged across her chest, leaving a wet trail of precum across her skin, and she shivered when she felt it. When she reached my lap, she held my cock against her sternum, between her tits, and squeezed them together around it.

"Fuck," I said.

"I want you to cum here first," she said, looking up at me. "On my tits. I've wanted that forever. I want to feel it. All that hot cum on my nipples."

She started moving. Up and down, slow, her tits wrapped around my shaft, milk and precum mixing together into a slick mess that made everything slide. The sensation was intense — the soft pressure of her tits, the firmness of her nipples dragging along the underside of my cock, the wet heat of it all.

"Kylie and I used to do this with a dildo," Layla said, still moving. "Pretending it was you. She'd hold it between my tits and fuck them and I'd watch her face and I could tell she was imagining the real thing. She'd say 'imagine if it was throbbing' and I'd say 'imagine if it was leaking' and we'd both get so wet we'd have to stop and eat each other."

I was getting close. The pressure was building at the base of my cock, that familiar tightness, and the throbbing was getting harder, faster. Layla felt it.

"You're close. I can feel it. The veins are getting bigger."

I came.

It shot up between her tits, thick and white, the first rope hitting her chin and dripping down. The second landed across her left nipple, pooling in the puffy pink skin, mixing with the milk that was still leaking. The third went across her chest, a long strand that connected her tits like a bridge. I kept going — four, five, six pulses — and she held still, watching, her mouth open, her tongue out just enough to catch what dripped from her chin.

"Oh my God," she said. She looked down at herself. Her chest was covered. Cum and milk, white on white, sliding down between her tits and over her stomach. She scooped some up with her fingers and brought it to her mouth. "It's so thick. Kylie was right."

She sucked my cock into her mouth.

The foreskin was still over the head, and she took it in like that, her lips closing around the bunched skin, her tongue working underneath it. I felt her peel it back with her lips, slow, and when the head was exposed, she swirled her tongue around it. I wasn't soft — I never really went soft — and she moaned when she felt it pulse back to full hardness in her mouth.

"I've wanted this in my mouth for so long," she said, pulling off just long enough to speak. "Every time I saw you at the school, every time Kylie talked about you, every time I thought about your cock while I was with her — this is what I wanted."

She went deeper. Her mouth was small and my cock was thick, and she had to stretch her jaw wide to take it, but she did. I felt the head press against the back of her throat and she gagged, pulled back, then tried again. The second time she got it past her gag reflex and I felt her throat close around me, swallowing, the muscles massaging the head.

"Fuck, Layla."

She pulled off, gasping, a thick string of saliva and precum connecting her lips to my cock. "I could do this all day. I want to. I want to drain you. Kylie said you can cum more than once without stopping and I want to find out."

She went back down. This time she found a rhythm, bobbing her head, her hand working the shaft where her mouth couldn't reach. Her other hand was between her legs — I could hear it, the wet sounds of her fingers in her pussy, and she was moaning around my cock, the vibration running through the whole shaft.

"I used to think about this while Kylie sat on my face," she said between strokes. "She'd be grinding on my tongue and I'd be thinking about your dick in my mouth instead. She knew. She'd say 'you're thinking about Peter's cock, aren't you' and I'd say yes and she'd say 'me too' and we'd both cum."

I came again. This time in her mouth. She held still, lips sealed around the shaft, and I felt her swallow. Once, twice, three times. My cock kept pulsing, kept shooting, and she kept swallowing, her throat working, her eyes closed. When I finally stopped, she pulled off slowly, letting the cum pool on her tongue before swallowing one last time.

"Two down," she said, grinning. "Kylie said you can go all night."

"Where is Kylie?"

"She's coming. I texted her when I got in your car." Layla checked her phone. "She's about ten minutes away."

She went back to my cock. Licking it clean, running her tongue along every vein, under the foreskin, around the head. She was methodical about it, like she'd been planning this for months. Which, apparently, she had.

"The third time," she said, "I want it on my tits again. And then when Kylie gets here, she can clean you up. She loves that. She told me she loves the way your cum tastes after it's been sitting on skin for a while. Something about it mixing with the milk."

I wrapped my hand around my cock, stroking slowly, feeling myself throb against my own palm. Layla watched, mesmerized, her hand back between her legs.

"I used to watch Kylie do this," she said. "Watch you jerk off, I mean. That time you were in the kitchen. You thought no one was home. You pulled it out and just started going at it, slow, and Kylie and I were in the hallway watching through the crack in the door. When you came, it went everywhere. On the counter, on the floor, on your hand. Kylie waited until you left and then she went in and licked the counter clean. I watched her do it. She was so into it. She said it was the best she'd ever tasted."

I was close again. The pressure was building faster this time, the throbbing more intense. Layla positioned herself in front of me, on her knees on the passenger seat, her tits pushed together, still slick with the cum from earlier and fresh milk.

"Come on," she said. "Give me another one. I want it. I want to be covered in it. I want Kylie to walk up and see me covered in your cum and know that I got it first."

I stroked faster, my hand tight around the shaft, the foreskin sliding up and down over the head. Layla leaned forward and ran her tongue over the tip each time it emerged from the skin, tasting the precum, her eyes on mine.

"I'm close."

"Do it. Cum on me. Please. I've wanted this so fucking long. Cum on my tits, cum on my face, cum everywhere. I want it all."

I came a third time. Less than the first two but still substantial — thick white ropes across her chest, her nipples, her neck. One strand caught her lower lip and she licked it into her mouth, moaning. She rubbed it into her skin with both hands, massaging it into her tits, her nipples, pulling at them until more milk leaked out and mixed with the cum.

"Three times," she said. "Kylie owes me twenty bucks. She said you'd only make it to two."

Headlights swept through the car. A knock on the window.

Kylie stood in the rain, grinning, her hair plastered to her face. Layla reached over and unlocked the door. Kylie slid into the back seat, soaked through, her shirt clinging to her body.

"Looks like you started without me," Kylie said, taking in the scene — Layla topless and covered in cum, my cock still out and hard, the car smelling like sex and milk.

"Three times," Layla said proudly.

Kylie leaned forward between the seats. "Let me clean that up." She took my cock in her mouth without another word, sucking the remaining cum from the head, running her tongue under the foreskin, swallowing everything. She was thorough, efficient, and clearly experienced. When she pulled off, she smacked her lips.

"Still the best thing I've ever tasted," she said. Then she looked at Layla. "Your turn."

Layla leaned over the console into the back seat, and Kylie pulled her pants down. I watched in the rearview mirror as Kylie buried her face between Layla's thighs, her tongue working in slow circles, and Layla grabbed the headrest and moaned.

"She tastes like you," Kylie said, coming up for air. "Like your cum and her pussy mixed together. It's perfect."

She went back down, and Layla's moans got louder, higher, her body shaking. I watched, stroking myself slowly, still hard, still throbbing, still leaking.

"I told you," Layla gasped. "I told you it would be worth it."

Kylie made a sound of agreement from between her legs, and the car filled with the sounds of her mouth, wet and eager, and Layla's breathing, ragged and fast.

"I want to do this again," Layla said, looking at me through the rearview mirror. "Every day. I want to suck your cock every day and have Kylie clean us up after."

Kylie pulled off just long enough to say, "Deal," before going back to work.

Layla came with a cry, her whole body tensing, her tits pressed against the back seat, milk leaking onto the leather. Kylie licked her through it, slow, gentle, until Layla collapsed forward, breathing hard.

The rain had stopped. The windows were fogged. The car smelled like cum and milk and pussy and sweat.

"So," Kylie said, wiping her mouth. "Same time tomorrow?"

I looked at Layla, sprawled across the back seat, covered in cum, grinning. Then at Kylie, still on her knees, her chin shining.

"I'll bring snacks," I said.

"Bring yourself," Layla said. "That's the only snack we need."

Kylie laughed, and Layla laughed, and I put my cock away and started the car. The engine turned over, the heater kicked on, and I pulled out of the dead-end road back toward the main street.

My daughter still hadn't texted me back. I figured she was fine.

I was definitely fine.